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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
It had never felt like this before, Tina was sure of it. In no time at all, Bette seemed to already have uncovered the secrets of how she liked to be touched. Her legs started shaking even more so when Bette’s tongue moved to her most sensitive area and fingers slipped inside her filling the void her tongue had left. This new shock of pleasure only brought her orgasm closer. She felt her body respond to the intimate caress by drawing Bette’s fingers in deeper.
Every moan, every gasp seemed to fuel Bette until Tina couldn’t control it anymore and she let her climax wash over her, body convulsing in waves, screaming in almost unbearable pleasure, her hands clutching in now messy locks, she trembled for what seemed an eternity, Bette’s mouth still on her, determined to see her come unravelled until the very last aftershock.
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Tina woke during the night, startled at first by the unfamiliar surroundings. It was surprisingly bright despite what she assumed to be late hour. The moon shone through the window, its soft glow further enhanced by the snow outside. The curtains had not been drawn and Tina suddenly remembered why and the warm sleeping body next to her confirmed it.
What had happened in the middle of the chalet’s living room was only the beginning of the events of that evening. It had been raw and passionate and fast, so so very fast that Tina had not anticipated what had come next.
Bette stood slowly; her hands dragged along the way, never leaving Tina’s body before their eyes met. She was quiet as if any words she may utter would fail her. She touched her fingers to Tina face and back down again to the hemline of the sweatshirt she had lent her, lifting it up and over the blonde head. The thin strap of her bra caught with it and was removed just as easily.
Bette stared at the younger woman, taking in the pale skin, the sharp slice of her collarbone, the heaviness of her breasts and Tina’s name tumbled out of the brunette’s mouth… tenderly this time.
The next thing the blonde knew was that Bette had eased her backward onto her bed and held herself above her for a moment but before she could press her body into Tina, the blonde wrapped her fingers around strong arms to lift herself into another kiss. The taste she encountered was new, it was Bette and it was also her. Tina shuddered in pleasure and Bette, worried about the room temperature, gently told her to scoot below the covers before scrambling to her feet to get undressed.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful