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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter five
So it was little to no surprise when Tina finally realised that the hands which were taking such a consummate amount of time exploring were in actual fact touching bare skin. Her jeans lay by her feet, having slid off her narrow hips once Bette had so deftly unbuttoned and unzipped her during their kiss.
The now kneeling brunette’s intense caress was sliding up Tina’s calves, inward to the soft flesh of her inner thighs. Tina braced herself on Bette’s shoulders biting her bottom lip, nose flaring as her breathing increased marginally and her skin flushed visibly.
The thought of self-combustion momentarily entered Tina’s mind especially when Bette’s hands moved to part her legs. Tina’s entire body pulsated and nowhere else was it more prominent than the juncture of her legs. But her breasts surpringly tingled too . She wondered the reason for this feeling until her brain briefly reminded her that Bette had skimmed her hands over them on her way down.
Tina’s mind reeled at the thought of what else the brunette was capable off if such an ephemeral touch could elicit such intensity in her. What would it be like when she was going to be touched fully? She had desired a moment like this, with a woman and this moment was now.
Bette’s hands crept up to her pale hips, fingers hooking over the waist band of her underwear pulling down slowly until it too joined the jeans by her feet on the floor.
When Tina felt her leg be raised over a strong shoulder, her back arched automatically, making her head hit the wall with a slight thud. Bette’s breath was now on her inner thigh.
“Bette,” Tina called in a panting breath, “I’ve never done this before.”
A low growl was the only answer the blonde heard before the mouth it had emanated from, kissed her flooded core for the first time.
Tina’s fingers dug deep into the shoulders she was holding on to, whimpering when she felt the heat of a tongue leave a scorching trail through her as equally warm hands caressed her thighs.
Tina’s was alight, a thousand stars lighting the back of her closed eyelids, a rapid pressure was mounting and coiling in her lower belly, she felt on the verge of imploding when Bette’s tongue pushed inside her. Her hands moved from their resting place on the brunette’s shoulders, to lose themselves in dark curls, gripping, encouraging bringing the heavenly sensation closer to her if it were possible.
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Sorry to hear about your computer problems. Glad you got to resort to plan D.
It was a absolutely 10 stars update.
I only didn’t see Tina’s first time with Bette like that coming, against a wall, but it shouldn’t be so surprising considering how Bette can be. Her second time was filled with tenderness.
I wonder how you are going to preceed with Tina returning to London and Bette staying behind.
I think Tina should mature and make something from her life, less partying, more working and less a daddy’s girl., before their is a healthy chance for a relationship between them.
oke, enough rambling, thanks for a great update!
….and that folks is how you write an NC17
Great chapter Kins my dear friend…Full of passion and desire for one another..A Tibette coming together..I bet
Tina wont be in any great hurry to return to London
So looking forward to the next chapter and possibly some more getting to know one another even better.
Loved it sweetie….PPS…C xx
That is how you do it!! Now, that my dear friends is love at its best! I’m having computer issues too. PPS
First the Dallas Cowboys win and now this..I am having a lucky day..gosh I love this story…now im waiting for their reaction afterwards
A lots of butterflies inside my stomach now…. Thank you for a great update. Pps
Absolutely beautifully written. I too was as dizzy as Tina as I read. It’s so good to have you back, Kins.
Just amazing! Bette devoured Tina. Your writing is simply sublime. And your NC-17s are passionate but not tawdry.
Wow!!! Tina has finally had her curiosity sated and questions answered in a magnificent way by the one and only Bette Porter. She can now say, “damn, so that’s what it is all about and how I’m supposed to feel after. My curiosity has been peaked regarding Bette since Tina first stumbled upon her and the chalet. What in the world is she doing in such an isolated area or is it really isolated, what does she do for a living and what has she been saying to Tina’s father to give him peace of mind about Tina being hurt and lost in such an isolated area. So many questions about our one and only. Fantastic story as always Kins. So happy to have you back with us. Thanks for posting and have a great week.
Wonderful to have you back posting Kins! You are a talented storyteller and writer with no need to resort to bad language to produce a truly passionate post. Thank you.
Sorry for your computer problems but good that you have enough reserve Plans to post!
Hoping the various Plan Options enable a follow up Chapter asap!
WOW! What chapter. I loved it, absolutely loved it.
although I still love the love of Tibette.
It was passionate, hot, and very gentle and loving. I love the way you write.
I wonder what will happen next. maybe it is a turning point in their relationship? or an eternal reminder?
I hope Tina stays for a while, and she realizes that this is what was missing in her life so far!
It was great and I look forward to the next chapter.
Great test drive! I bet this was more than Tina was hoping for! And now what? Hope your pc feels better. Wonderful to have you back!
The snow around the house should have melted all
! because it was too hot inside.
Love that NC 17 was of great quality.
Let’s see how they will look from now.
10 stars.
I have no doubt that you are simply one of the greatest here. I so love this story. I know that you have a lot of surprises for us regarding Bette’s background and I’m so excited for it.
I love you. Haha! Please post soon!
Scribe
Oh.My.God. It’s been a long time since I’ve read one of these NC-17. Yikes and holy smokes…all in a good way.
I wonder if Bette works for Tina’s father….hmm. I can’t wait to read more.
T
wow! That was HOT Kins!
Keep it coming dear friend! Amazing as always.
Oh damn that was hot and beautiful