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Frozen – Chapter 5 – The Grinch (Part 1)
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We were able to charm a whole room. There were no heads turned away from us each time we walked in. A special aura could be felt around the two of us, and people could sense it from ten meters away. Our souls walked along, following the same path; they lived for the other one’s sake.
It was one of those big nights for Bette, it was the first time I got to accompany her to the opening of one of her shows as her girlfriend. She was looking stunning and I was the proudest woman on earth. I was Bette Porter’s girlfriend and people around us seemed to be captured by what was unfolding in front of them. As we entered the room their stares were planted on us… especially on her.
“It’s amazing” I said in awe.
“What?”
“You” I smiled, “This” then I added pointing to the crowd.
“It’s you”
“What do you mean?”
“It’s you they’re looking at” she smirked.
“What? Come on” I giggled, “They’re looking at you”
“Exactly” she said earning a frown from me, “Don’t you see? This smile. This confidence… it’s you. They’re looking at your reflection on me”
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The river in front of me stopped our journey. I looked at the water and it flew so fast I couldn’t see my reflection, unstoppable. The river perfectly cut the forest in two. There was no way to reach the other side. My thoughts mirrored its flow as they started to fill my head with my worst fear: the frightening image of Angelica struggling to stay afloat. The noise of the water hitting the rocks was soon buried by my strong breath. I started to panic; that’s been my new habit lately.
“Oh my God, no” I started to say, “No, please, no. Make her be okay, please” I covered my mouth with my trembling hands as I sobbed “What if – what if she fell in there? Please, tell me she’s okay” I wouldn’t stop praying.
“Hush, did you hear that?” she asked me, I guess. I couldn’t hear anything, not even her words. The only thing banging against my eardrums were my sobs and words.
“Did you hear that?” she asked again.
“What?!” I snapped, “I don’t fucking care about hearing a thing. I just want my baby back!”
“Fuck, shut the hell up, and listen!” she uttered in a stern voice. I was going to call her names until I finally hear the sound she was talking about. It was someone crying in the distance. We walked around a giant rock where there she was, my baby girl, sitting on the ground. She was crying and it hit me like thousand bricks. I knew it was our fault.
“Baby! Oh, my baby, come here. I was so scared” I ran toward her, I needed to hold her, but she stopped me. Actually, she pulled away abruptly: “Don’t touch me!” she said, with her big black eyes filled with tears staring at me.
I was taken aback, but I hoped, I hoped she could forgive me “Sweetie, come on/”
“NO! It’s your fault if I don’t know my other mom. It’s your fault if she hates me, now!” she yelled. She was angry at me. My own flesh and blood. I had hurt her. And a new wave of sobs washed over me.
“Please, baby. I swear, I will tell you anything you want/”
But she cut me off again… with her words cutting straight through my heart “I hate you!” Her voice was so loud it echoed through the forest taking the two of us by surprise. Even the mountains looked small compared to the majority of those words. Hate. She hated me.
As I stared into her eyes I was starting to speak but Bette’s stern voice cut in “Enough!”
Our heads quickly turned toward the source of the words… she was staring at us. We momentarily forgot we had an audience, a very pissed off one, I might say. Then her eyes scanned me. No words needed, it was all just a giant mess.
“Here” she said, handing me another coat “She’s trembling… she might catch a cold”
I took it from her and tried to help Angie, who of course refused my help. As soon as she was ready we started walking, we needed to go back as soon as possible for the sky was announcing the upcoming of another storm.
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Bette0Porter. you are incredible, an incredible writer! I love this story and the chapter 5… I want the part 2 SOON!
Oh God, you are back! Offcourse i don’t hate you!
For such a incredible writer i will wait for eternity.
I am glad Angie is allright and i can’t blame her for her outburst to Tina.
What have me worried is that Bette ” is walking straight to hell ” like you wrote. Will something terrible happening to her? Is she sick?
I hope you will update soon again and can answer those questions for me.
‘Bout time my friend! Please make part 2 longer – there has to be a good ending!!!
Well well you finally answered my hopes…im sure me pesting you for an update was annoying but hey i was desperate…omg now can I say yeeessssssss you’re back!!!! Ah my life is complete but dang it all 4 pages….well im not complaining pps and you’re aweessoomee my friend
BOP,
Welcome back!!!!! I truly miss you :( Glad to read the 1st Part of your Last Chapter. But based on your story, it seems like Bette’s heart is still frozen. Don’t know if you are planning to have a sequel for this with a title MELTED. Hahaha! Coz I think that Bette is still not prepared for a reconciliation unless you’ll have a long part 2 with an Epilogue.
Anyway, I am just so happy that I almost hyperventilated when I saw your update. Hi hi! Please Post Soon.. please Pretty please..
Love,
Scribe
thx for coming back with this story, but I think we will need at least another 10 chapters………. and they must be like in 10 pages each……. ok sorry. thx for this story, we lovev it. pps. and please please bring he 3 of them back together.
thx.
Of course I hate you! Just joking I’m but all too happy to see you back here. I’ve been missing your stories. Don’t keep us too long in suspense ’cause I can’t wait to know what you meant with “Little did I know she was walking straight to hell.” and as you know patience is not exactly one of my virtues.
For now thanks for the beatiful story which was as usual very well written.
LW
Ti aspettavo con ansia..ma non mi hai delusa…grazie per il post..e grazie per la piccola anteprima privata. Sai chi sono vero? Si, credo di si. ^____^ciao tesò.
I’m so glad you’re back, my friend! It was a wonderful chapter. I absolutely loved it.
You are a wonderful writer, and this is a fantastic story.
of course not the usual romantic story of Tibette (which my heart is beating faster) but you still my heart beat with this story ;)
I hope your Tibette’s heart beats happy ending in the end :)
I look forward to the next chapter, but please don’t so long :)
Thank you for the update ! Well, I have to starts reading from chapter one again to remind me of the story, Indeed breath catching and sad…. I believe there are so much to talk about between Tina & Bette, the unsolved. Please don’t go away for too long….. Pps
thanks for the update cant wait until the next post
This story and fantastic!
I hope B & T to exorcise the demons and
d be able to live together again.
10 stars.
Do not delay to update.
Felt the scary and the panic of Ang making it outside. As a mom it’s the scariest thing ever. Her reaction to Tina makes perfect sense too. But Bette is angry despite what she tells her. Probably mostly angry at herself, I’d guess. Self-blame is so destructive.
Anyway, so now I’m caught up and waiting for the resolution. I’m guessing Bette’s heart will be melted, as well as Tina’s, and they three will be a family again.
I should say too I detect your classical education (i.e. European) because your style and diction are poetic and reveal exposure to some great ideas for one so young :) Haha…I can say that because I’m old :)
Nice story and I look forward to the final chapter.