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Frozen – Chapter 5 – The Grinch (Part 1)
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“Wow, mama, Bette is so strong! You should see her picking you up from the ground and carrying you all the way here!” she said proudly.
Hell! She held me! That was our first ‘friendly’ contact and I cursed myself for missing it. I looked at her and I couldn’t help the slight blush that covered my cheeks. She could still make me feel like that.
“Thank God I wasn’t drunk” she said and… was that a smirk?
• • •
“Oh my God, baby, you’re going to trip and let me fall!” I giggled.
“If you shut up, missy, I’m sure I won’t” she said trying to sound sober.
We were back home after a night spent dancing, laughing and drinking – a lot! – with our friends. And she was trying to climb the front door steps without letting us both fall.
“You didn’t carried me inside when we got married!” I told her earlier that night. I was only pulling her leg. Even though ours wasn’t really a wedding we still shared our vows two years before, and to us that meant getting married none-the-less. I said it before even starting our night out, I thought she had forgotten by then, but as soon as we got home, after she paid the driver, I felt her hands on me and quickly found myself in her arms.
Needless to say she lost her foot and we fell, without even climbing the first step.
• • •
“Thank God” I laughed. But an immense sense of sadness overwhelmed me. We were so happy. She must have sensed it too, for she was now looking somewhere else. I wonder what was going on in her head. I wonder if she would think about me or us when she was in New York. She sure was thinking about us right there, right then, and it kind of gave me relief. It was sad though, because what was left were only memories.
“For how long have we been here?” I asked. I hated that silence.
“The whole afternoon, it’s past seven” she said.
“Wow” I was shocked. “It only seems like two hours ago”
“Yeah, a lot of things tend to look as if they happened not long ago”
I didn’t know what she meant by it, and I didn’t even get the chance to ask her for she got up and occupied herself with the fire. I knew the wall was still far from coming down.
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Bette0Porter. you are incredible, an incredible writer! I love this story and the chapter 5… I want the part 2 SOON!
Oh God, you are back! Offcourse i don’t hate you!
For such a incredible writer i will wait for eternity.
I am glad Angie is allright and i can’t blame her for her outburst to Tina.
What have me worried is that Bette ” is walking straight to hell ” like you wrote. Will something terrible happening to her? Is she sick?
I hope you will update soon again and can answer those questions for me.
‘Bout time my friend! Please make part 2 longer – there has to be a good ending!!!
Well well you finally answered my hopes…im sure me pesting you for an update was annoying but hey i was desperate…omg now can I say yeeessssssss you’re back!!!! Ah my life is complete but dang it all 4 pages….well im not complaining pps and you’re aweessoomee my friend
BOP,
Welcome back!!!!! I truly miss you :( Glad to read the 1st Part of your Last Chapter. But based on your story, it seems like Bette’s heart is still frozen. Don’t know if you are planning to have a sequel for this with a title MELTED. Hahaha! Coz I think that Bette is still not prepared for a reconciliation unless you’ll have a long part 2 with an Epilogue.
Anyway, I am just so happy that I almost hyperventilated when I saw your update. Hi hi! Please Post Soon.. please Pretty please..
Love,
Scribe
thx for coming back with this story, but I think we will need at least another 10 chapters………. and they must be like in 10 pages each……. ok sorry. thx for this story, we lovev it. pps. and please please bring he 3 of them back together.
thx.
Of course I hate you! Just joking I’m but all too happy to see you back here. I’ve been missing your stories. Don’t keep us too long in suspense ’cause I can’t wait to know what you meant with “Little did I know she was walking straight to hell.” and as you know patience is not exactly one of my virtues.
For now thanks for the beatiful story which was as usual very well written.
LW
Ti aspettavo con ansia..ma non mi hai delusa…grazie per il post..e grazie per la piccola anteprima privata. Sai chi sono vero? Si, credo di si. ^____^ciao tesò.
I’m so glad you’re back, my friend! It was a wonderful chapter. I absolutely loved it.
You are a wonderful writer, and this is a fantastic story.
of course not the usual romantic story of Tibette (which my heart is beating faster) but you still my heart beat with this story ;)
I hope your Tibette’s heart beats happy ending in the end :)
I look forward to the next chapter, but please don’t so long :)
Thank you for the update ! Well, I have to starts reading from chapter one again to remind me of the story, Indeed breath catching and sad…. I believe there are so much to talk about between Tina & Bette, the unsolved. Please don’t go away for too long….. Pps
thanks for the update cant wait until the next post
This story and fantastic!
I hope B & T to exorcise the demons and
d be able to live together again.
10 stars.
Do not delay to update.
Felt the scary and the panic of Ang making it outside. As a mom it’s the scariest thing ever. Her reaction to Tina makes perfect sense too. But Bette is angry despite what she tells her. Probably mostly angry at herself, I’d guess. Self-blame is so destructive.
Anyway, so now I’m caught up and waiting for the resolution. I’m guessing Bette’s heart will be melted, as well as Tina’s, and they three will be a family again.
I should say too I detect your classical education (i.e. European) because your style and diction are poetic and reveal exposure to some great ideas for one so young :) Haha…I can say that because I’m old :)
Nice story and I look forward to the final chapter.