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Frozen – Chapter 5 – The Grinch (Part 1)
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The last thing I remembered was myself trying to breathe, then darkness embracing me. I was laying on my side, on what felt like a rocky ground, and something comfy under my head; a rolled scarf maybe. A warm feeling coming from the left side of the ‘room’ made me realize a fire was near. I didn’t even know what happened, I could hear voices around me, but couldn’t bring myself to open my eyes. I know I was facing them for I could see the shadows move around through my lashes, but I kept them closed. I just laid there, listening.
“Why did you bring us here?”
“It’s too dangerous out there”
“I know, but… I mean… you seem so” I could feel Angie was struggling with sharing her thoughts.
“So what?” Bette asked her, intrigued.
“I mean, I feel you don’t really like me and my momma, and I find it strange for you to take us somewhere safe”
“Oh…” I heard some hurt in Bette’s voice, and even if I couldn’t see her face, she probably let her stare fall down. I knew that tone. She used to sound like that whenever I had hurt her. “It’s not like I’m an evil person, you know” she chuckled. “I may act strange, sometimes, but I’m not… I’m not evil” it was as if she wanted to justify herself.
“You just… you just look really angry” my baby girl said in a little voice.
“I’m not angry” she defended herself.
“Then what are you feeling?”
Hurt. I would have said. “I…”
She was starting to speak but something tickled my nose awakening in me the need to sneeze, and sneezed I did, scaring the shit out of everyone and obviously cutting Bette off.
“Fuck” I whispered as I sat up. The thought of not being able to know how Bette was feeling unnerved me. I squinted my eyes and adjusted my sight. A cave? We surely were in a cave, but why? “What happened?” I said groggily.
“Mama!” Angie ran toward me, pulling her arms around my neck “Mama, I’m sorry. I was so scared when you fell, you wouldn’t wake up and I thought it was because I yelled at you. Mama, I swear I didn’t mean to. I’m sorry” she said with her pleading eyes.
“Oh baby, no, it’s not your fault. Mama didn’t have breakfast this morning and I guess I was just weaker than usual” I assured her as I held her tight.
I looked at Bette who was staring at us. She was sitting on the other side, with her back against the wall. “What happened?” I repeated.
“You fainted as you may guess. The storm was approaching too fast and I decided it was better for us to look for a repair”
“Thank you” I whispered. A shrug was her only response.
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Bette0Porter. you are incredible, an incredible writer! I love this story and the chapter 5… I want the part 2 SOON!
Oh God, you are back! Offcourse i don’t hate you!
For such a incredible writer i will wait for eternity.
I am glad Angie is allright and i can’t blame her for her outburst to Tina.
What have me worried is that Bette ” is walking straight to hell ” like you wrote. Will something terrible happening to her? Is she sick?
I hope you will update soon again and can answer those questions for me.
‘Bout time my friend! Please make part 2 longer – there has to be a good ending!!!
Well well you finally answered my hopes…im sure me pesting you for an update was annoying but hey i was desperate…omg now can I say yeeessssssss you’re back!!!! Ah my life is complete but dang it all 4 pages….well im not complaining pps and you’re aweessoomee my friend
BOP,
Welcome back!!!!! I truly miss you :( Glad to read the 1st Part of your Last Chapter. But based on your story, it seems like Bette’s heart is still frozen. Don’t know if you are planning to have a sequel for this with a title MELTED. Hahaha! Coz I think that Bette is still not prepared for a reconciliation unless you’ll have a long part 2 with an Epilogue.
Anyway, I am just so happy that I almost hyperventilated when I saw your update. Hi hi! Please Post Soon.. please Pretty please..
Love,
Scribe
thx for coming back with this story, but I think we will need at least another 10 chapters………. and they must be like in 10 pages each……. ok sorry. thx for this story, we lovev it. pps. and please please bring he 3 of them back together.
thx.
Of course I hate you! Just joking I’m but all too happy to see you back here. I’ve been missing your stories. Don’t keep us too long in suspense ’cause I can’t wait to know what you meant with “Little did I know she was walking straight to hell.” and as you know patience is not exactly one of my virtues.
For now thanks for the beatiful story which was as usual very well written.
LW
Ti aspettavo con ansia..ma non mi hai delusa…grazie per il post..e grazie per la piccola anteprima privata. Sai chi sono vero? Si, credo di si. ^____^ciao tesò.
I’m so glad you’re back, my friend! It was a wonderful chapter. I absolutely loved it.
You are a wonderful writer, and this is a fantastic story.
of course not the usual romantic story of Tibette (which my heart is beating faster) but you still my heart beat with this story ;)
I hope your Tibette’s heart beats happy ending in the end :)
I look forward to the next chapter, but please don’t so long :)
Thank you for the update ! Well, I have to starts reading from chapter one again to remind me of the story, Indeed breath catching and sad…. I believe there are so much to talk about between Tina & Bette, the unsolved. Please don’t go away for too long….. Pps
thanks for the update cant wait until the next post
This story and fantastic!
I hope B & T to exorcise the demons and
d be able to live together again.
10 stars.
Do not delay to update.
Felt the scary and the panic of Ang making it outside. As a mom it’s the scariest thing ever. Her reaction to Tina makes perfect sense too. But Bette is angry despite what she tells her. Probably mostly angry at herself, I’d guess. Self-blame is so destructive.
Anyway, so now I’m caught up and waiting for the resolution. I’m guessing Bette’s heart will be melted, as well as Tina’s, and they three will be a family again.
I should say too I detect your classical education (i.e. European) because your style and diction are poetic and reveal exposure to some great ideas for one so young :) Haha…I can say that because I’m old :)
Nice story and I look forward to the final chapter.