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    Get The Girl—Chapter 4: Bowling and Serious Talk

    I roll my eyes and half chuckle “Yeah Kennard….Get your mind out of the gutter and while you’re at it keep this bowling ball out of it too”

    “Huh?”  Her face is priceless right now

    “The gutter Kennard” I repeat turning around and pointing at the indented spaces on either side of the lane

    “Oh…Ok..That is also called the gutter..Got it.” she laughs crinkling her nose and I nod…This girl is going to be the death of me

    “Yes and stay out of it” I giggle for a second but then I regain my composure and sigh looking into curious hazel eyes “Look..Uhmm..Tina…I wanted to apologize for that back there at the cafe.  I didn’t mean to make you uncomfortable..The reference of the fingers sliding in the hole thing..I wasn’t trying to insinuate anything honestly..I’m just like that sometimes… I say things before I realize how they may sound and when you were talking so intensely about Alyssa I couldn’t help that .” I stop my incessantly ramble when my mouth is suddenly covered by a very soft warm palm

    “Porter..Stop…Take a breath ok” she smiles and chuckles at my deer caught in headlights look as I nod  “If I take my hand away will you promise to shush?” she asks and I just nod…Suddenly embarrassed that I rambled on..The usually calm, cool and collected Bette Porter turns into a rambling fool in front of one of the most beautiful girls I ever laid my eyes on..Way to go Porter..She thinks you’re an idiot.

    She slowly takes her hand away from my mouth and I remain silent waiting for her to speak

    “Good…Now..You have nothing to apologize for ok….It was nothing” she says nonchalantly and takes the bowling ball from my hands to cradle it with her free one

    Of course it was nothing on her end..But I really thought I saw her look at my lips like she wanted to kiss them..Ugggh..Enough…She wants Alyssa and she would never  want me anyway

    Tina

    I couldn’t let Bette know at that moment in the cafe I wanted to kiss those lips.  I didn’t want her to get the wrong idea.  I just got caught up in my hormones.  That’s all it was.  I glance up at her and I can’t be certain but for a moment it looks like disappointment but then she flashes her sexy smile at me…I mean just because I really like Alyssa and want my chance with her doesn’t mean I can’t find other girls attractive..And I do find Bette extremely sexy.

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    1. I am enjoying this story…. but oh what a mess. No one has a straight forward relationship with anyone else. Everyone has someone they like but isn’t available. I am sorry that Bette is still having pain from her injuries. I do hope that some of that will heal as time goes on. I understand her fear that her scars might be repugnant to others, but her fear is not keeping her safe or comforted. This is something Bette is going to have to work through or she needs to get some counseling on. Everyone has body issues and some are worse than others. But when someone cares for you or falls in love with you, they accept you for who you are: flaws and all. Bette has a beautiful personality and a lovely charm and a scarred body. She is going to be a very lonely person if she allows her past and these scars to keep her from her from the future possibilities of her life…..

      As to Alyssa? A senior in high school forced by her parents to date another girl to assist the merger of two businesses? That’s the sort of thing that royal families did in the middle ages. Arrange marriages and relationships between families to enhance the bank account. Oh well…. got to see where this goes.

      Keep it going…. thank you for the chapter.

    2. A truly good story!

      This is a mess like Martha already pointed out.

      I love what Bette does for Tina despite her own feelings for Tina. And Tina is so in denial about her feelings towards Bette, unfortunately also because she now only has one wish and that is Alyssa, her first crush. But she’s a sweetheart to point out to Alyssa that there’s a reason Bette shuts herself off from everyone. If anyone brings Bette and Alyssa together as friends, it’s Tina.

      I feel so bad for Alyssa that she is forced to be with someone because of a corporate business, the merging between her fathers and Holly’s companies. That must be really terrible.

      And poor Bette, so insecure because of the severe burns she has suffered and so much pain, even though her nerves may start working again, the scars on her body and mind will never go away. Perhaps with therapy, the trauma of what happened to her will become more bearable, but it will never go away completely.

      I’m very curious how this will all go.

    3. Boy, such a tough plot to resolve with Bette’s scars needing time to heal, yet her emotions/hormones being so active when she’s near Tina.

      U’ve really taken on a literary challenge. But keep goin’ as we come along with ya!!

    4. Love your story, hope you post soon. I like all the twists and turn… our heart takes us on a ride sometimes with out a clear path and at this age can be extra confusing.
      And it has a feel of a mobster world first Bette and her step dad now Alyssa’s dad. Just has that feel but i like. Thank you

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