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Great Unexpectations Chapter 10
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The gathered crowd stood in silence, looking at Bette and Tina. Finally, Shane and Alice were able to break their way through. "Holy shit, you guys. Are you ok?", Shane asked. They both nodded, not able to speak. Bette, for her lingering shock. Tina, for the pain in her wrist. "Tina. You’re hurt", Alice said, noticing the way the blonde was holding herself. Bette looked down at Tina’s hand and then into Tina’s eyes. "That fucking asshole!!", Bette said as she turned to go after Richard, who was already well on his way. "Bette, stop", Tina said. "They’re gone. Besides, he didn’t do it. It’s from when I hit her."
Bette tried to suppress a slight smile as she remembered the all too quick, and rather one sided battle. "Alright, come on Tina. We’re getting you checked out. Alice, can you get our things? We have to go." Alice nodded and headed back to the table to get their purses but was met by Helena who had already predicted the request.
"Bette, I’m ok. Really. Can we just go home?", Tina asked weakly. Against her better judgement, Bette relented, giving a half smile and questioning eyes. "Are you sure, T?". Tina nodded.
Tina turned to Kit. "Kit, I’m sorry. I broke my glass back at the table." Kit looked around at the many broken glasses that now littered the floor and chuckled. "What’s one more?", she grinned.
"Oh, god, Kit. I’m so sorry", Tina said, now for the first time really taking in the disaster area that was The Planet.
"Don’t sweat it, honey. That’s what insurance is for. Besides, if you hadn’t hit her, I would’ve", she smiled. Tina attempted to return the smile but between her pain and her embarrassed shame it was not within her power.
Noticing the onlookers that still stood nearby Kit shouted, "Alright, people! Show’s over and the bar is open!! Drink up ladies. Somebody’s gotta cover the deductible. And whose idea was it to start throwing chairs? Jesus!!
Outside in the parking lot, Richard and Faye were sitting in her Mercedes Benz. He was in the driver’s seat, while she was seated in the back on the passenger side. "Well, that went better than I thought it would", Faye said smiling at her own attempt at humor as she put a cold compress to her cheek. She’d had the foresight to pack a first-aid kit, just in case. "Easy for you to say, Mrs. B", Richard said, embarrassed, as he used a sterile bandage to wipe the blood coming from his nose, lip, and corner of his eyebrow. Having his ass handed to him by a bar full of dykes was not on top of his ‘write home about’ list. If he’d had a home to write to, that is. After sufficiently cleaning himself he put the keys in the ignition and looked at his passenger. "Are you ready to go?"
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Gosh, nothing like a barroom brawl to arouse the libido. Excellent chapter. Have a great time and please write when you can.
WOW! Tina really saw red didn’t she. Great chapter, have a good time at the festival and we will be eagerly awaiting your next post.
Well, Alpha Tina was really greatbut I really would have liked for her to have socked her another one for good measure. Anyway both Buckley’s got what they deserved. Now I just know the next chapter will be an NC-17. RIGHT? Have a great time on your vacation.
U r right, I’ll say it again “U can not Stop there”LOL but seriously I love this story and Tina’s Punch was GREAT shame about the hand though:)
Wow, that was something! Alpha Tina to the rescue and Bette liked it too. Have fun at the festival.
Ok, Tina was waiting for any explanation was she? Still don’t get this whole Faye thing. If she just wanted to apologize why come to The Planet. Don’t trust her, and hope she stays away from B&T.
Every girl should know how to deliver a good punch. Just in case certain people show up.. But what’s up with Faye B? Was that genuine remorse? Can’t wait until your next update, I love the story :) Peace ADx
Bette finds Alpha Tina hot? Niiice. Buckley is a creep. Hope the next chapter is hot and sweet.
No doubt about it: Alpha Tina is a hottie. I hope that sore wrist of hers won’t be an impediment when she gets her reward. And I hope Bette and Tina will be united as they battle whatever evil scheme Buckley’s cooked up. PS: I didn’t think you were going for laughs with the hand-stepping moment in Chapter 9. My (very nervous) laughter was a cathartic response to a truly wrenching situation (which would have made great TV; damn you, IC). I encountered the “Bax” concept on an L Word forum; sorry for sharing, because I know too well how hard it is to get that horrible image out of your head.
Yeah, Alpha Tina is well hot. And Faye Bitchley had it coming. It’s just a pity Tina didn’t get a second wallop in. That being said, I don’t think her appearance has done Bette and Tina any harm… Or has it? What’s Faye up to? Enquiring minds wanna know, so post as soon as you can… waiting 10 days is gonna be an agony. (But have fun!) Cheers, red.
Gotta agree with Bette, Tina was so fucking hot! Can’t figure Faye out though…guess I’ll just have to wait those ten days… Enjoy the festival.
Damn Red! You weren’t kidding when you said that Bette wasn’t gonna have a lot to say about it. Tina had everything to say about it…with her fist! LMAO. Tina definitely shouldn’t be embarassed and I have a feeling Bette will show her why!
Hmmmm…Bette will have to show Tina some “hands on” appreciation for coming to her rescue. LOL! PS.
I LOL’d@the air horn. XD Foxy Brown has spoken! And I am not surprised that Tina hurt herself from that punch. lol
Sweet, I love it when someone gets what’s coming to them and in this lifetime as opposed to the next! Awesome update. PPS
:) Just great! Will you give us another dose:)? PPS!
good for tina to defend bette…i think that faye is bette’s mother LOL
oh yeah!!!! thanks 4 posting b4 u go…waiting for u 2 get back…..
Oh no no sarcasm at all. I am pleased that you write the story as you do. And yet this is again a great update.
I understand Faye wanting to apologize but watching Bette and Tina get in the car and then leave. Not sure why she needed to see that. What I would think that she needs to see is Bette, Tina and Angelica. She needs to see how much Angelica’s mommies love her and how much Angelica loves her mommies.
That was awesome!