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Great Unexpectations Chapter 17
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"No problem. Hold on."
Bette took a seat as Kit stepped into the kitchen to place the order. "They’ll be out in a minute", Kit said when she returned half a minute later.
The Porter sisters sat in a contented silence until a thought came to Bette. "Kit. I know it’s only Monday, but you have had a chance to cash that check yet? The one from Faye?"
"Actually, I did. I’m sorry I forgot to tell you. And I even donated the money already. I went to that center where Tina used to work. They were very happy to see me, let me tell you." Kit stood up and went back behind the bar. She knelt down and brought out her purse. "Here’s the receipt."
"Thanks Kit", Bette said as she looked at it on the way to her own purse. She gave it a second glance quickly and stopped in her tracks.
"Kit! This is for the whole amount. This is for ten thousand dollars. You were supposed to keep what you needed to replace everything."
"Oh please. I’m not using that woman’s money. Thought you’d know me better than that. And don’t tell Tina either. She wanted to pay me herself, but her money is no good here."
"Kit, that’s very generous but-"
"But nothing. Don’t you two worry about it. Just think of it as a housewarming gift. Ok?"
Kit had on her ‘determined’ face, and Bette knew there was no use in arguing with her. She relented with a sigh, a hug, and a kiss on the cheek. "Love you, Kit. So much."
A bell rang from the kitchen followed by a loud "Order up!".
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Toting the takeout bag, Bette walked through the studio lot towards Tina’s office. She found Tina with her back to the door, staring out a window, talking on her phone headset. Bette stood in the doorway and admired Tina’s physique. The simple lines of her suit both skillfully advertised her curves and accentuated her svelte frame. Bette let herself into the office and sat down on the sofa while Tina continued her conversation unaware. "I know Frank. Listen to me…it’s not my fault she disappeared. No. I have no idea where she is. No, I haven’t heard from her. Ok, fine. I’ll get the lawyers on it, we’ll see what we can do." She clicked a button on the pack around her waist, disconnecting the call, and let her head drop. "Fuck!!", she muttered.
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excellent posting, love every sentance just wondering what the heck is that Faye Buckley up to ???pps
Red I love the way you write…so intriguing, and so descriptive. This was an excellent chapter. You don’t have to have bar room brawls, BBQ’s and coins for it to be exciting! *wink* However, having Bette Porter strutting naked around the pool once it awhile does seem to heighten the excitement level just a tad! LOL! Thank you so much Red! More please!
I wonder what the good lawyer and Miss Buckley are up too.
Definitely not a let down. The light, fun, happy, romantic Bette and Tina are wonderful to read. Not everything can be a big turning point.. but sometimes its even better that way. PPS.
Why is it Tina and Bette can imagine each other dressed in certain ways, or doing certain tasks and it always leads back to sex. Wait a minute I’m talking Bette and Tina, of course it leads to sex. Gotta love them. Still wondering what Faye is up to. It appears she’s trying to make amends but why?
What next? What next? huh? huh?
i’m really loving the way you write, i just got caught up with this whole story properly, and you’ve got me hooked!! its not often i read a story as its written, im so impatient that i usually go for finished stories but yours is just too good to not get hooked straight away!! im intrigued to see what faye buckley is up to. i love the way you capture all the characters perfectly, please post another chapter soon!! i don’t think i can take too long a wait!!
Great post..really enjoy B/T being happy and together..thanks
Storm clouds? I’m worried. Faye Buckley is an ill wind that blows no good. Thanks!
ooooh, grease monkey Tina could be quite hot. I love your happy, sexy, in love Bette and Tina. Still trying to figure out what our sneaky little Faye is up to…hmmmm. Great post rh!
Hrmmm… storm clouds and Faye Buckley. I like the sound of neither. I *do* like the idea of a glistening Tina, all smudged and dirty and…. Um. Yes. I’ll leave that train of thought now… I quite liked (read: loved) this chapter, as I’ve quite liked (read: loved) all of your other chapters. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the next post, thanks, red.
OOh the foreshadowing! LOL. I’m not sure why you thought this chapter would be a let down cause it aint little missy! You’ve just moved the story along and judging by the nature of the comments got everyone hooked for the next wave. What IS Faye up to??? Why is Jenny such a pain in the ass? What exactly did Tina have for luch? All of this has us on the edge of our seats, anxiously waiting for more! Please do not doubt your abilities to amuse, entertain, and enthrall, they are ever present! PPS
Good chapter, love B&T!
ditto to what chelseagal and anngie mosby wrote. excellent as usual. i TOLD you she’d get towed.
mmm all the loving and all the intringue, thank u…
I love all your posts, even the ones without brawls and BBQ’s :). Glad to see Bette and Tina so infatuated with one another. I hope they never lose that feeling. Let’s get Tina home :)
Great update, can’t wait to see what the heck Buckley is up to.
Mmmmmm Grease Monkey Tina…*dies*
I am so loving this. Way to go Bette!!!! I just hope Faye takes the big hint and backs the F*** OFF. Thanks PPS
Faye Buckley is a pain in the ====. Does she want Bette or Tina. That right hook of Tina would stop me. I’ll wait.
What kind of scheming game plays Faye Buckley. I hope Bette and Tina be able to see through her game and resist
Like Audi, I love those angst-free moments in which Bette and Tina simply take pleasure in each other’s company. Is it the calm before whatever storm Faye Buckley is brewing? Bette seems just the type who would hum to C-Span!