LesFan

Lesbian Fan Social Network

    Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 15, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Great Unexpectations Chapter 30

    Story written on November 7, 2007 by redhorse.
     Login to add story to favorites
     Login to add author to favorites
    17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 517 votes, average: 4.29 out of 517 votes, average: 4.29 out of 517 votes, average: 4.29 out of 517 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5 (17 votes, average: 4.29 out of 5)
    You need to be a registered member to rate this post.     Loading ... Loading ...
    Genre(s):
    Rating:
    fanfiction(s):
    Character(s): ,
    Number of Comments: 16
    Words: 5613
    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67434
    Author Notes:

    Season 5. I’m spent from writing the chapter. Can’t think of a summary. Power suit. There. Just came to me.

    —

    The next day began much like the previous morning with one exception. Bette accompanied Richard to meet the elusive Jason Landers. Tina sat with Faye, while they waited for word. Faye walked to the window of her hotel room and looked out over the city. Somewhere out there was her daughter. Or at least somebody who might know where she was. She held great hope that they were nearing the end of their search. Tina fixed herself a cup of coffee and nibbled on a piece of pineapple from the room service tray.

    "Tina", Faye said while still looking out the window. "Tell me about your daughter." Faye turned, smiling, and made her way to a nearby chair. Tina, surprised by the query, gave a startled smile in response. She finished chewing her fruit. "Um, ok", she said. She began to beam thinking of her daughter. "She’s just wonderful. She’s happy. She’s smart. Bette thinks she can already read. I’m not so sure. She follows along to her books, but I think it’s just because she’s memorized them. Sometimes she’s very stubborn. Likes things done a certain way. Hers."

    This inspired quiet laughter from Faye. She grinned as she recalled her one encounter with the child. "She’s beautiful, Tina."

    "Thank you, Faye. Even though it’s not biologically possible, Bette and I like to think that she’s a combination of the best in both of us. That she’s a part of each of us. Does that make sense?"

    Faye nodded and smiled. "It does. And I think you’re right. There is no denying that child. Either of you. Not that you’d want to." Thinking of the awful hateful things she’d said nearly three years ago brought a light mist to her eyes. Tina reached out to her and held her hand.

    "It’s alright Faye. We’ll find her. I really believe that. We are going to find Cora." Faye had neither the strength nor desire to inform Tina as to what inspired the moist eyes. She simply squeezed her hand and looked away. Again staring out the window.

    —

    Richard and Bette stood on the stoop waiting for somebody to answer the Landers’ doorbell. Again, the gruff looking woman answered the door. "Yeah?" Richard began to speak but was interrupted. "Oh. You again." Although he’d not yet said a word, she gave him the distinct impression that he’d somehow wronged her in the past. She closed the screen door and was soon heard to yell, "Jay!! Somebody here to see you!!"

    Page 7 of 11« First‹ Previous56789Next ›Last »
    «
    FF Main Page
    »

    Comments

    3. Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!

    4. Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!

    8. Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.

    10. Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.

    11. And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS

    12. Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!

    14. Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.

    Leave a Reply