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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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"Just enough to be dangerous. We better get out of here", she said brushing her lips against Tina’s temple.
Tina shuddered again and tried to fight off the tingles. "I was thinking the same thing", she said with weak voice.
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The elevator taking them to their hotel suite was inconveniently filled with a handful of other guests. They cast side glances and smiles at each other, hoping that the next floor would be the one at which they lost their company. Each floor that passed by was a source of great disappointment.
Finally, they reached their floor. They practically trampled the other occupants in their haste to exit the tiny lift box. Giggling, they took each other by the hand and raced down the hall. Tina fumbled through her purse in search of the key card and expertly slid it into the electronic lock and Bette turned the knob. Once inside they flung their purses to a nearby chair and looked hungrily into each other’s eyes. Their lips met and parted. Soft. Wet. Tina pushed Bette up against the door, running her hands under the dark jacket. "God, I love this suit babe", she panted.
"Well, that puts me in quite a predicament", Bette teased. "I was planning on taking it off."
"Oh yeah. It definitely has to go", Tina agreed with a smile.
Within minutes the suit lay crumpled across the room, cast about with a random abandon akin to spent artillery rounds. Now laying in bed Tina besieged Bette’s skin with warm soft kisses, paying special attention to her heaving breasts. She traced her tongue around Bette’s hardened nipple and when Bette cried out in exquisite pleasure she dropped her mouth to it. Covering it. Tasting it. Sucking it. "God, Tina!!", Bette moaned. Even as she embraced the breast she smiled. She loved hearing Bette call out her name like that. Loved being the one to bring such ecstasy to Bette. Their legs intertwined. Their centers met, moist and hot. Grinding against each other. That feeling that begins as tingles in the stomach and ends as explosions in the loins was progressing rapidly. The quivering of Bette’s hips let Tina know that she was almost there. Tina slipped her hand down and thrust deeply into Bette just in time to encourage the orgasm. Bette’s voice caught in her throat while her hips shook violently. "Yes!!! Fuck!! Tiiiinnaaa!!" Tina kissed her neck while Bette recovered. The love they shared that evening was long, slow, and plentiful.
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!