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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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"Hmm", Bette hummed lowly, savoring the kiss. "I don’t know. Clean livin’ I guess", she smiled.
"I love you so much, Bette."
"Well, maybe tonight you can show me", Bette flirted, raising her eyebrows.
"If I can wait that long", Tina flirted back.
Bette decided a change of subject was in order before they got too carried away. "Are you hungry T?"
"Not so much", she grimaced, placing a hand on her stomach and rubbing softly.
"You sure you’re ok?"
"Yeah, I’ll be fine. Don’t worry."
"I like worrying about you, T"
Tina brought her hands to Bette’s waist and began to lightly rub her hips sending a barrage of tingles throughout that region. Bette gasped and closed her eyes, moaning softly.
"See, Bette", Tina whispered softly into her ear. " You can’t say things like that. It’s just that kind of thing that makes it harder to wait until tonight."
"Point taken", Bette gulped, barely containing her burgeoning desire.
Tina turned her attentions to Angie, holding her arms out to her. Angie quickly reciprocated by holding out her own arms as Tina lifted her out of the raft to give her a hug and kiss. "Hey Sweetie, do you wanna play?" Tina began to bounce lightly up and down, splashing Angie’s legs in the water as the child giggled. After splashing and swimming to the point of her own exhaustion Tina put Angie back in the raft and pushed her gently to Bette. Bette volleyed her back to Tina as they both made silly faces, trying to amuse their Angel.
"Ya know," Tina mused biting her bottom lip conspiratorially, "maybe if we wear her out we can get to bed early?"
"Tina, you should be ashamed of yourself." Bette feigned disapproval. "Ashamed you didn’t think of that sooner" she grinned.
They both laughed as they resumed playing with their adoring daughter, though now with less than altruistic intentions. Angelica was too young to understand a lot of things. For example, she didn’t understand why pears tasted better than squash. She didn’t understand why Teddy Bear never talked back to her. She didn’t even understand how this round floaty thing kept her above the water. But she did understand that Mama T and Mama B were having fun together, and that was good enough for her.
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!