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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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Later that evening as they were loading the dinner dishes into the washer they began casting those familiar glances and smiles at each other again. Tina brushed up beside Bette and grazed the dark arm with her own. It never ceased to amaze Bette how such a simple gesture from Tina could send chills of delight through her entire body. Bette turned to Tina with her eyes half-closed and mouth slightly ajar, as she was trying to calm her racing heart.
Tina grinned at the response showing on her lover’s face as she leaned in for a kiss. Bette accepted the kiss with a greediness she could not temper. She brought Tina closer to her as their mouths happily engaged each other. Tina’s hands wandered up Bette’s body and loitered lazily on the side of her cotton covered breasts. Bette moaned at the sensation. "Oh God T."
"Hold that thought", Tina said lowly after she reluctantly pulled away. She went to the living room to gather up Angie and brought her to Bette. "Give Mama a kiss goodnight sweetie." Angie tiredly reached for Bette as Bette collected her, giving her a soft hug and kiss, while softly rubbing her back. Angie rested her head on Bette’s shoulder as she fought off sleep. Tina smiled at Bette as if to signal that soon they would be on their own. "I’ll take her to bed. You stay here, babe."
Bette handed Angie back to Tina, and as she watched the blonde walk down the hallway she called out with a smile, "Oh sure, you just don’t wanna finish loading the dishes." Tina waved without looking back and answered, "True story", leaving Bette to laugh softly.
Bette continued to clean up in the kitchen and a few minutes later was happily surprised by two lithe arms wrapping around her waist. Bette wrapped her own arms around Tina’s, not letting her go. Tina began kissing the back of Bette’s neck and squeezing her around the waist. "Oh Got Bette, I have half a mind to take you on this floor right here and now."
Well, that’s what she thought she said anyway. Her muddled mind and uncooperative mouth could only manage, "Bette. Floor. Now."
Bette turned around and nimbly lifted Tina’s shirt over her head. She gazed lovingly as she stood still, admiring the bare breasts. "God T, you are so beautiful."
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!