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Great Unexpectations Chapter 7
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Bette winced at the words. "Hey, Bette", Alice said softly putting her hand on Bette’s knee. "The point is… she got over them. Maybe it’s just hard for you right now because everything is so new again. I dunno. But one sure-fire way to erase bad old memories is to make great new ones."
Bette smiled. "That’s kind of what Tina said."
"So you’ve talked about it? That’s good. You should listen to her, she’s a smart lady."
"She’s a lot more than that, Alice."
"Oh god, you’re not gonna get all mushy are ya?"
"I might", Bette grinned. "But probably not. Some things are better left unsaid."
"That is so not my philosophy", Alice mused. "Ok, I’m gonna leave", she smiled. "I just came over to make sure everything was ok, and obviously it is so…"
"OK, but remember. This is not for public consumption. I better not hear of this ending up on your chart", Bette repeated her warning.
"It won’t. I promise. But, I can’t guarantee how long I can go without at least telling Shane. I’ll try. I’ll really try, but come on. This is me we’re talking about", she admitted.
"Just give us a few days. Let me talk to Tina, ok?. We’ll let you know when we’re ready to tell people." They made their way to the door, still negotiating.
"Three days", she affirmed. "After that I’m not responsible for what I do."
"That must be a nice way to live."
"It’s actually very freeing", Alice agreed, laughing as she walked to her car. Bette stood at the doorway watching Alice start her car while thinking over the events of the last ten days in general and the last two days in particular. She smiled to herself and went back inside.
The rest of the day she tried to keep herself busy catching up on voice mail and e-mail messages. It was all she could do to keep herself from calling Tina but she refrained, confident that Tina would call or come over as soon as possible. She managed to catch up on most of her sleep while Angie took her morning and afternoon naps.
As the hands on the livingroom wall clock neared 5:30 Bette began to slowly panic. The doubts, like an unwelcome guest, crept into her thoughts. We’ve moved too fast. She’s changed her mind. She thought she could trust me, but now realizes that she can’t. She began to get a weak feeling in her stomach as the minutes ticked away. She picked up the phone with every intention of calling Tina to damn her for leading her on. As she dialed the fifth number she heard the familiar low roar of Tina’s car enter the driveway. She put the phone down and tried to calm her racing heart, filled with a meekly humbled embarrassment at her hasty reaction. Jesus Christ, Bette. Get a grip. Trust in Tina.
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I’d better be first ’cause I LOVED that chapter :D “This too” :) I love your story.. Tina and Bette reunited :’D Your wonderful writing makes it difficult to not enjoy :) Well done, post soon :)
I’m well impressed, red. You keep topping yourself. Excellent. More soon, please!
Oh, heck. This page has refreshed, and that last comment came out 31 flavors of wrong, either side of the pond. I meant excelling yourself, or something like. You know what I meant though, right, red? Ack, this is what I get for staying up this late on a weeknight. Still tho, post soon!
Another great chappie Red, thanks for updating. And JP, your comment made sense although with you falling all over to clarify your intended meaning the image of “topping yourself” took on a whole new light!! LOL. Don’t worry, all the kids are doing it these days!! *wink*
you were fine the first time jp. laughing my ass off!! thanks for the words though.
So Tina’s handiwork was more extensive than we thought. I did notice the word, redhorse, but truth be told page 3 of chapter 6 went into my archives file because of the scorching-hot Tibette sex scene. Tina and Bette aren’t the only ones basking in the afterglow in chapter 7. I do wonder if Alice can zip it for three whole days; that seems a tad ambitious. And I hate to say it, jp, but the double entendre occurred to me only after I read your clarification. But then I can be pretty slow on the uptake.
great update..i was too surprised that alice would wait, but will she really? thanks for keeping tibette together
Great chapter! PPS!!
Another wonderful chapter made even better with the return of the Sharpie! Much more than ‘mildly amusing’… love your writing especially the playful B & T.
Red you are soooo good! It was hilarious when Alice found the writing on Bette’s back side that Bette didn’t even know about! If anyone is watching me they probably think I’m crazy because I’m sitting here giggling to myself with the thought of that scene playing over and over in my mind. The look on Bette’s face is classic. This was so much more than “mildly amusing!” Thank you Red for the happy days! More please!
Thanks for the lovely story and excellent update. More please.
loved the dialogue…excellent update.
LMFAO@This too! XD Wow, so Alice is giving them 3 days. Is that 3 days in real people time or 3 days in Alice time, which is about the same as 10 seconds?
You just gotta love this. Cracking up at Tina marking her territory, you go girl. 3-days, wow, I don’t know how Alice is gonna do it. Bette love tina, now she just needs to learn a bit of trust.
Wonderful!
oh what a happy chapter…even Alice isn’t gonna blow it for them…u have to post soon…
Red….You’re smooth. Your writing is smooth, freakin’ funny and realistic dialogue w/all the characters. You do have a way w/words, so natural. You must be very clever and comedic in person. PPS. I can’t wait.
I started this story last night but thunder and lightening forced me turn off the computer. I was bummed by that because I was really getting into the chapter. I have always loved the banter between Bette and Tina. That is something that the show has missed out on. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Oh, I do love the body art that Tina put on Bette.