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Great Unexpectations Chapter 7
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She flitted around clumsily trying to decide if she should appear casual (by reading a magazine on the sofa) or anxious (by opening the front door before Tina vacated her car). Tina made the decision for her as the door opened while Bette stood, still consumed by her thoughts.
"Babe, I need a hand", Tina said as she struggled with two grocery bags and a medium sized piece of luggage. Bette immediately snapped to action and relieved Tina of the two grocery bags. "Tina, you didn’t have to do that", Bette said as she carried the food to the kitchen.
"Have you seen the inside of your refrigerator lately, Bette? Does the word ‘barren’ mean anything to you?", she smirked. "I guess you’re right", she conceded, helping Tina put the groceries away.
After shelving and refrigerating everything they stood closely, nervously looking at each other, the shy smiles appearing. "Hi", Bette said delicately, barely above a whisper. "Hi", Tina answered back, taking Bette’s hand in her own, lacing their fingers. The physical contact along with the smell of Tina’s perfume aroused Bette immediately as she felt the tiny hairs on the back of her neck becoming erect. Bette leaned in as Tina closed her eyes to accept the coming kiss. Their lips met softly at first, parted slightly. As Tina tasted Bette’s lips she opened wider, ravenous for more. Tina’s tongue slipped into Bette’s consenting mouth as they struggled for breath and steady limbs. Bette pulled Tina close by the waist and felt the warmth of her center. Their lips bruised as the passionate kiss continued and moans began to escape their throats. Tina wrapped her arms around Bette’s neck, daring her to try escaping her clutches. Mindful that their very much awake daughter was just in the other room not ten feet away, they set about to postpone their intentions for a more appropriate time. It was not an easy battle. They managed to break their kiss but that only prompted them to hold each other closer, feeling each other’s warm arousal. "Oh god, T. We have to stop", Bette panted as Tina ran her hands through the long dark curls. "I know, Babe. I know", Tina responded, her words halting. Bette kissed Tina’s neck and tightened her embrace of Tina’s waist for one final squeeze before regretfully letting her loose. Tina, likewise, loosened her grip on Bette’s neck and gingerly released her hands from Bette’s hair. "Mmm. That was nice", she purred as Bette smiled.
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I’d better be first ’cause I LOVED that chapter :D “This too” :) I love your story.. Tina and Bette reunited :’D Your wonderful writing makes it difficult to not enjoy :) Well done, post soon :)
I’m well impressed, red. You keep topping yourself. Excellent. More soon, please!
Oh, heck. This page has refreshed, and that last comment came out 31 flavors of wrong, either side of the pond. I meant excelling yourself, or something like. You know what I meant though, right, red? Ack, this is what I get for staying up this late on a weeknight. Still tho, post soon!
Another great chappie Red, thanks for updating. And JP, your comment made sense although with you falling all over to clarify your intended meaning the image of “topping yourself” took on a whole new light!! LOL. Don’t worry, all the kids are doing it these days!! *wink*
you were fine the first time jp. laughing my ass off!! thanks for the words though.
So Tina’s handiwork was more extensive than we thought. I did notice the word, redhorse, but truth be told page 3 of chapter 6 went into my archives file because of the scorching-hot Tibette sex scene. Tina and Bette aren’t the only ones basking in the afterglow in chapter 7. I do wonder if Alice can zip it for three whole days; that seems a tad ambitious. And I hate to say it, jp, but the double entendre occurred to me only after I read your clarification. But then I can be pretty slow on the uptake.
great update..i was too surprised that alice would wait, but will she really? thanks for keeping tibette together
Great chapter! PPS!!
Another wonderful chapter made even better with the return of the Sharpie! Much more than ‘mildly amusing’… love your writing especially the playful B & T.
Red you are soooo good! It was hilarious when Alice found the writing on Bette’s back side that Bette didn’t even know about! If anyone is watching me they probably think I’m crazy because I’m sitting here giggling to myself with the thought of that scene playing over and over in my mind. The look on Bette’s face is classic. This was so much more than “mildly amusing!” Thank you Red for the happy days! More please!
Thanks for the lovely story and excellent update. More please.
loved the dialogue…excellent update.
LMFAO@This too! XD Wow, so Alice is giving them 3 days. Is that 3 days in real people time or 3 days in Alice time, which is about the same as 10 seconds?
You just gotta love this. Cracking up at Tina marking her territory, you go girl. 3-days, wow, I don’t know how Alice is gonna do it. Bette love tina, now she just needs to learn a bit of trust.
Wonderful!
oh what a happy chapter…even Alice isn’t gonna blow it for them…u have to post soon…
Red….You’re smooth. Your writing is smooth, freakin’ funny and realistic dialogue w/all the characters. You do have a way w/words, so natural. You must be very clever and comedic in person. PPS. I can’t wait.
I started this story last night but thunder and lightening forced me turn off the computer. I was bummed by that because I was really getting into the chapter. I have always loved the banter between Bette and Tina. That is something that the show has missed out on. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Oh, I do love the body art that Tina put on Bette.