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Healing a sequel to The Plot
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Suddenly it was like her mouth had a mind of its own and it wanted to saturate Bette’s empty mouth. Quickly swallowing twice Bette was desperately trying to swallow the excess saliva before she put a bite into her mouth. Looking down at the eggs, they looked fluffy, hot and inviting. It was a look that mocked Bette, daring her to eat them. Picking up a bit of egg on her fork, Bette slowly brought it up to her face. Swallowing the excess saliva before opening her mouth she slowly put the bit of egg into her month. Bette didn’t even have a chance to swirl the bits of eggs around in her mouth. They had only been in her mouth for about two seconds before her gag reflexes kicked in. It has all been inevitable.
Instantly Bette knew the eggs were not a good idea. Jumping up she raced out of the kitchen. It was all Bette could do to not hurl before she got to the bathroom. Any thoughts of making Kit happy were gone.
Kit’s smile froze on her face and then was gone with the streaking Bette. This was behavior Kit had seen way too much of from her early days. Part of her knew Bette wouldn’t be able to handle food. But when she seemed interested Kit let her common sense go and fixed her up a fresh plate. Now she regretted it. There was nothing worse then throwing up, especially when you haven’t eaten anything for a long time. All that’s left is stomach acids, which will lead to the dry heaves. The memory of her personal experience with this sent a shudder down her back. She instantly regretted how she just made Bette’s morning worse.
“I’ll go help her.” Tina said almost as soon as Bette left the kitchen.
Kit immediately puts her hand on Tina’s shoulder preventing her from getting up. “No… Tina let me go.” Kit feels sad about putting Bette in her current position. “I know better then to put food in front of someone in her condition. I should have known better. You do what she’s been doing to herself for as long as she has and not have a drug hangover. Let me get her squared around.”
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Did I actually catch this fast enough to be the first to comment? How are you, my friend? Twelve hours to get to Atlanta really sucks. But look what you have given us! Talk soon. Hugs. Lin
Fantastic!! Loved the bobble-head image! You are so good at this writing stuff! My mouth was watering as I was reading…and not in a good way!! LOL Thanks!!
So good to see you writing.
Ouchie. This story is so hard to read… in a good way. To imagine someone as strong as Bette reduced to this? Heart-breaking. Thanks, Jwet! It just hurts so good :D PPS!
This is heart-breaking but oh, so accurate. PPS!
I love your stories. This one is a little heart breaking with Bette so down but you’ll make it right I sure.PPVVS
Man, this is hard. Bette needs help, but will she except that help? Thank goodness Kit understands what is happening to Bette’s body.
Inch by Inch we feel Bette’s pain. Hopelessness… Wow…..More please…
So sad, come on Bette let them help you and getting better. What cadyass have to tell Alice now. Please post more, thanks!
I think Tina should take care of Bette instead of Kit! She will be more nurturing with less judgement.
Whoa, J this is some really tuff stuff!!! Thx but when does B come out of this tragic downward climb. Should I go back read the prequel=the previous story? Who wrote it plz?
In this story Helena is the devil. don’t like her at all. Gosh so painful to see Bette like this. I can’t bear it. I hope Bette somewhere deep inside her will remember Tina truly loves her and is the person who will help her get out of this hole. I also hope that Bette will start climbing this hole out very very soon. Can’t see her suffering like that any more. Helena needs to learn that you don’t hurt Bette or any member of the family and get away with it, she would get punish nd very soon (I hope). PPVS
Geez…Bette is really in tough shape but I think her portrayal here is very true to her character. I expect that we haven’t seen just how low she’s going to go. This is a great story and I look forward to your next post.
Thanks for the update. I love Alice and Dana scheming to “accidentally” bump into Candace. I was laughing out loud picturing the two of them dancing like maniacs. I hope Alice gets some useful information out of her. Tina is going to need all the support she can get trying to help Bette out of the dark hole she has sunk into. I hope Bette is ready to make some changes soon. It is so hard so see her in this condition.
Heartache, but yet so good keep up the great work.
so very sad. sometimes you do have to fall but its still hard and sad. i know there is drama about. were under water also. just moved in on sat. the sewer has backed up!!!! thx
Wonderful but so sad!!!!! I just hope Bette can pull herself together and get better. Now what does CandyAss have to tell Alice? Thanks PPS
Hey JWet, Wonderful to have another post from you so soon of this inticing and intriguing story. Your descriptive skills bring me right into the middle of the action. I can see the brightest fo the light blinding Bette and hear the loud, harsh sounds she wants to run from. Even her attempt at eating was expressive. I could feel my stomach heave and argue with my head as to the success of consuming some sustenance. A speedy exit was required. Then Kit’s realization of the error of this meal and its effect on Bette. Good to see Kit taking the lead here and helping her sister through this tough time.And as for Alice and Dana; the comedic crime cappers. This dynamic duo trying to eavesdrop and then catch Candace was hilarious. More please of this magical read. So appreciated from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I just love the way you write. It’s like being in the room with them.
An excellent update. Thank you. You have such a way with words. Love this story. Thank you again :)