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Healing a sequel to The Plot
“Well it’s a good thing you’ve got me then.” Alice says with joy. “That’s Candace Jewell, as in ‘the Carpenter’ Candace Jewell.” Alice state triumphantly while her finger make quotation signs.
“Oww really?” Dana questions. “Didn’t you just talk to her?”
“I sure did. Come on we need to get closer so we can hear what they’re saying. I bet this is really good.” Alice says while grabbing Dana’s arm and pulls her to the edge of the dance floor that’s closest to Helena’s table.
Standing on the very edge of the dance floor, Alice strains her neck trying to hear what her targets were saying. Together Alice and Dana observe the stare off between the two of them. When Candace casually ends the match Alice whistles between her teeth in Dana’s ear. “Do you see the daggers shooting out of Helena’s eyes?”
“Alice do you think Candace has a death wish?” Dana asks watching Candace turn her back to Helena.
“I don’ know but come on let’s bump into her she’s coming this way.” Alice begins moving off the dance floor with her body shaking to the beat of the music. When she notices Dana isn’t keeping up she whisper loudly. “Come on Dana!”
Dana quickly catches up swinging her body in large exaggerated motions to reach Alice’s side. Together now, the two collide full force into Candace who’s standing just off the edge of the dance floor.
“What the Fuck.” Candace exclaims pushing the two off her. “Watch where you’re going.”
“Oh hey Jewel, sorry we just got carried away.” Alice says trying to be casual but her panting is giving her away. “What’re you doing here?” Alice turns as she speaks looking over to Helena’s table.
Candace now sees that it’s Alice and then notices the direction Alice is look but doesn’t turn herself. She’s seen enough of that broad tonight. “Caught that action huh?”
The question was answered by one look at Dana eyes that were as large as saucers and her head imitating a bobble head doll.
“If you’re serious on getting something on that bitch then meet me out back in 15 minutes.” Candace says in a low voice and then looks at Alice. “And don’t bring bobble head here she looks like she isn’t up for the challenge.”
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(59 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
Did I actually catch this fast enough to be the first to comment? How are you, my friend? Twelve hours to get to Atlanta really sucks. But look what you have given us! Talk soon. Hugs. Lin
Fantastic!! Loved the bobble-head image! You are so good at this writing stuff! My mouth was watering as I was reading…and not in a good way!! LOL Thanks!!
So good to see you writing.
Ouchie. This story is so hard to read… in a good way. To imagine someone as strong as Bette reduced to this? Heart-breaking. Thanks, Jwet! It just hurts so good :D PPS!
This is heart-breaking but oh, so accurate. PPS!
I love your stories. This one is a little heart breaking with Bette so down but you’ll make it right I sure.PPVVS
Man, this is hard. Bette needs help, but will she except that help? Thank goodness Kit understands what is happening to Bette’s body.
Inch by Inch we feel Bette’s pain. Hopelessness… Wow…..More please…
So sad, come on Bette let them help you and getting better. What cadyass have to tell Alice now. Please post more, thanks!
I think Tina should take care of Bette instead of Kit! She will be more nurturing with less judgement.
Whoa, J this is some really tuff stuff!!! Thx but when does B come out of this tragic downward climb. Should I go back read the prequel=the previous story? Who wrote it plz?
In this story Helena is the devil. don’t like her at all. Gosh so painful to see Bette like this. I can’t bear it. I hope Bette somewhere deep inside her will remember Tina truly loves her and is the person who will help her get out of this hole. I also hope that Bette will start climbing this hole out very very soon. Can’t see her suffering like that any more. Helena needs to learn that you don’t hurt Bette or any member of the family and get away with it, she would get punish nd very soon (I hope). PPVS
Geez…Bette is really in tough shape but I think her portrayal here is very true to her character. I expect that we haven’t seen just how low she’s going to go. This is a great story and I look forward to your next post.
Thanks for the update. I love Alice and Dana scheming to “accidentally” bump into Candace. I was laughing out loud picturing the two of them dancing like maniacs. I hope Alice gets some useful information out of her. Tina is going to need all the support she can get trying to help Bette out of the dark hole she has sunk into. I hope Bette is ready to make some changes soon. It is so hard so see her in this condition.
Heartache, but yet so good keep up the great work.
so very sad. sometimes you do have to fall but its still hard and sad. i know there is drama about. were under water also. just moved in on sat. the sewer has backed up!!!! thx
Wonderful but so sad!!!!! I just hope Bette can pull herself together and get better. Now what does CandyAss have to tell Alice? Thanks PPS
Hey JWet, Wonderful to have another post from you so soon of this inticing and intriguing story. Your descriptive skills bring me right into the middle of the action. I can see the brightest fo the light blinding Bette and hear the loud, harsh sounds she wants to run from. Even her attempt at eating was expressive. I could feel my stomach heave and argue with my head as to the success of consuming some sustenance. A speedy exit was required. Then Kit’s realization of the error of this meal and its effect on Bette. Good to see Kit taking the lead here and helping her sister through this tough time.And as for Alice and Dana; the comedic crime cappers. This dynamic duo trying to eavesdrop and then catch Candace was hilarious. More please of this magical read. So appreciated from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I just love the way you write. It’s like being in the room with them.
An excellent update. Thank you. You have such a way with words. Love this story. Thank you again :)