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With that Candace walks away from the duo and merges into the crowd on the dance floor.
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Bette’s mind was still sorting out the fuzzy cobwebs left over from her trip. That being the case, her motor skills are not up to her usual grace. After interrupting Tina and Kit’s conversation she made her way to the kitchen table and clumsy deposits herself in a heap. Sweating and a little out of breath from the exertion, Bette couldn’t believe the effort it’s been to get up and investigate the noises. Still not quite all together, Bette wasn’t sure now that she’s discovered the source of her annoyance if the effort was worth it. The disturbance was enough to wake her up and leave her annoyed but she hasn’t had enough time to get back to her full capacity.
Once seated, Bette took a moment to gather her wits about her. Nothing seemed to feel right, even her own kitchen chairs seemed to be unusually hard or maybe she never realized how uncomfortable sitting at the kitchen table could be. Bette felt herself sliding just a bit into a slouch but didn’t care enough to straighten up her back. She was trying to decide if she even cared that both Tina and Kit were here in her kitchen.
Neither Tina nor Kit said a word. If they noticed Bette’s lack of grace they both avoided looking at each other and didn’t say a word. They held back waiting for Bette to make the first move. Tina felt a crushing pressure around her heart at the sight of Bette’s appearance.
Despite the cobwebs, Bette could feel the tension in the room. She didn’t understand much of the meaning of the conversation taking place between Kit and Tina. But she understood the tone. In her fog she was trying to determine why they were here? What were the two of them arguing about? Has she let these two down again? Of course she has but at this moment she can’t put her finger on the specifics of her infraction. Choosing to ignore it as just one more of many grievances she has caused, Bette looked over at Tina’s empty plate confused.
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Did I actually catch this fast enough to be the first to comment? How are you, my friend? Twelve hours to get to Atlanta really sucks. But look what you have given us! Talk soon. Hugs. Lin
Fantastic!! Loved the bobble-head image! You are so good at this writing stuff! My mouth was watering as I was reading…and not in a good way!! LOL Thanks!!
So good to see you writing.
Ouchie. This story is so hard to read… in a good way. To imagine someone as strong as Bette reduced to this? Heart-breaking. Thanks, Jwet! It just hurts so good :D PPS!
This is heart-breaking but oh, so accurate. PPS!
I love your stories. This one is a little heart breaking with Bette so down but you’ll make it right I sure.PPVVS
Man, this is hard. Bette needs help, but will she except that help? Thank goodness Kit understands what is happening to Bette’s body.
Inch by Inch we feel Bette’s pain. Hopelessness… Wow…..More please…
So sad, come on Bette let them help you and getting better. What cadyass have to tell Alice now. Please post more, thanks!
I think Tina should take care of Bette instead of Kit! She will be more nurturing with less judgement.
Whoa, J this is some really tuff stuff!!! Thx but when does B come out of this tragic downward climb. Should I go back read the prequel=the previous story? Who wrote it plz?
In this story Helena is the devil. don’t like her at all. Gosh so painful to see Bette like this. I can’t bear it. I hope Bette somewhere deep inside her will remember Tina truly loves her and is the person who will help her get out of this hole. I also hope that Bette will start climbing this hole out very very soon. Can’t see her suffering like that any more. Helena needs to learn that you don’t hurt Bette or any member of the family and get away with it, she would get punish nd very soon (I hope). PPVS
Geez…Bette is really in tough shape but I think her portrayal here is very true to her character. I expect that we haven’t seen just how low she’s going to go. This is a great story and I look forward to your next post.
Thanks for the update. I love Alice and Dana scheming to “accidentally” bump into Candace. I was laughing out loud picturing the two of them dancing like maniacs. I hope Alice gets some useful information out of her. Tina is going to need all the support she can get trying to help Bette out of the dark hole she has sunk into. I hope Bette is ready to make some changes soon. It is so hard so see her in this condition.
Heartache, but yet so good keep up the great work.
so very sad. sometimes you do have to fall but its still hard and sad. i know there is drama about. were under water also. just moved in on sat. the sewer has backed up!!!! thx
Wonderful but so sad!!!!! I just hope Bette can pull herself together and get better. Now what does CandyAss have to tell Alice? Thanks PPS
Hey JWet, Wonderful to have another post from you so soon of this inticing and intriguing story. Your descriptive skills bring me right into the middle of the action. I can see the brightest fo the light blinding Bette and hear the loud, harsh sounds she wants to run from. Even her attempt at eating was expressive. I could feel my stomach heave and argue with my head as to the success of consuming some sustenance. A speedy exit was required. Then Kit’s realization of the error of this meal and its effect on Bette. Good to see Kit taking the lead here and helping her sister through this tough time.And as for Alice and Dana; the comedic crime cappers. This dynamic duo trying to eavesdrop and then catch Candace was hilarious. More please of this magical read. So appreciated from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I just love the way you write. It’s like being in the room with them.
An excellent update. Thank you. You have such a way with words. Love this story. Thank you again :)