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Healing a sequel to The Plot
“You were eating breakfast?”
Encouraged at Bette’s inquire about food, Kit jumps at the opportunity to move around and release some of her own tension. “Yes she is.” She offers quickly for Tina. “I whipped up a little something for Tina. Let me get you a plate Bette. There’s plenty.”
Kit made her way over to the cabinet and pulled out a plate for Bette. Now that the silence was broken, Kit kept up the noise by talking secretly, afraid to stop. “You know how pregnant Mommas are. You have to keep them fed, that’s just the way things are. I remember when I was pregnant with David, now I tell you he was a load. Always kicking I thought he would never stop. I don’t think I could go for four hours with eating something or other. My biggest craving was Mexican and I’ll tell you the hotter the better. Those jalapenos would kill me afterwards but they were mighty good going down.”
Kit’s movements appeared as a blur to Bette both physically and mentally. It was the noise she was making that was having an adverse effect on Bette. The more Kit talked the more her voice rang sour to Bette. Shrill in a sharp penetrating way that was the only way to describe it. Piercing, high pitched and harsh, the tone instantly grating on all of Bette’s nerve endings adding to her annoyance.
It didn’t seem to matter whether or not she could keep up with Kit because before she could give any thought to whether she wanted food there was a dish of scrambled eggs sitting before her. Looking up to Kit when she laid the plate down, Bette looked straight into Kit’s eyes. She could see the warmth there that shone through lighting up her features and putting a smile on Kit’s face. What a contrast to all the unwanted noise coming from her. It registered on Bette’s consciousness that by eating Kit’s offering it would make Kit happy.
Deep down she wants to make Kit happy, hell she wants to make everyone happy. “Auh …thanks Kit.” Bette says looking down at the plate and slowly picking up a fork. Looking down at the plate before her, Bette noticed the plate was full. The mere smell from the little swirl of steam coming off the eggs causes Bette’s mouth to water but not in a good way. The appealing look was deceptive at least to Bette in her current state.
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(59 votes, average: 4.46 out of 5)
Did I actually catch this fast enough to be the first to comment? How are you, my friend? Twelve hours to get to Atlanta really sucks. But look what you have given us! Talk soon. Hugs. Lin
Fantastic!! Loved the bobble-head image! You are so good at this writing stuff! My mouth was watering as I was reading…and not in a good way!! LOL Thanks!!
So good to see you writing.
Ouchie. This story is so hard to read… in a good way. To imagine someone as strong as Bette reduced to this? Heart-breaking. Thanks, Jwet! It just hurts so good :D PPS!
This is heart-breaking but oh, so accurate. PPS!
I love your stories. This one is a little heart breaking with Bette so down but you’ll make it right I sure.PPVVS
Man, this is hard. Bette needs help, but will she except that help? Thank goodness Kit understands what is happening to Bette’s body.
Inch by Inch we feel Bette’s pain. Hopelessness… Wow…..More please…
So sad, come on Bette let them help you and getting better. What cadyass have to tell Alice now. Please post more, thanks!
I think Tina should take care of Bette instead of Kit! She will be more nurturing with less judgement.
Whoa, J this is some really tuff stuff!!! Thx but when does B come out of this tragic downward climb. Should I go back read the prequel=the previous story? Who wrote it plz?
In this story Helena is the devil. don’t like her at all. Gosh so painful to see Bette like this. I can’t bear it. I hope Bette somewhere deep inside her will remember Tina truly loves her and is the person who will help her get out of this hole. I also hope that Bette will start climbing this hole out very very soon. Can’t see her suffering like that any more. Helena needs to learn that you don’t hurt Bette or any member of the family and get away with it, she would get punish nd very soon (I hope). PPVS
Geez…Bette is really in tough shape but I think her portrayal here is very true to her character. I expect that we haven’t seen just how low she’s going to go. This is a great story and I look forward to your next post.
Thanks for the update. I love Alice and Dana scheming to “accidentally” bump into Candace. I was laughing out loud picturing the two of them dancing like maniacs. I hope Alice gets some useful information out of her. Tina is going to need all the support she can get trying to help Bette out of the dark hole she has sunk into. I hope Bette is ready to make some changes soon. It is so hard so see her in this condition.
Heartache, but yet so good keep up the great work.
so very sad. sometimes you do have to fall but its still hard and sad. i know there is drama about. were under water also. just moved in on sat. the sewer has backed up!!!! thx
Wonderful but so sad!!!!! I just hope Bette can pull herself together and get better. Now what does CandyAss have to tell Alice? Thanks PPS
Hey JWet, Wonderful to have another post from you so soon of this inticing and intriguing story. Your descriptive skills bring me right into the middle of the action. I can see the brightest fo the light blinding Bette and hear the loud, harsh sounds she wants to run from. Even her attempt at eating was expressive. I could feel my stomach heave and argue with my head as to the success of consuming some sustenance. A speedy exit was required. Then Kit’s realization of the error of this meal and its effect on Bette. Good to see Kit taking the lead here and helping her sister through this tough time.And as for Alice and Dana; the comedic crime cappers. This dynamic duo trying to eavesdrop and then catch Candace was hilarious. More please of this magical read. So appreciated from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I just love the way you write. It’s like being in the room with them.
An excellent update. Thank you. You have such a way with words. Love this story. Thank you again :)