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I Fall Behind pt.11
“Of course not Bette. Pull up a couple of chairs.” Alice’s distracted voice perplexed Bette.
“Hey Tina!” Shane mumbled.
“Mind you don’t step on my bag.” Dana cautioned.
Bette looked at Tina, confusion on her face. Tina
shrugged to indicate that she was as confused as Bette was.
“Erm. Well, I’m gonna go get us breakfast. Tina? You
really want that protein shake?” Bette spoke slowly, still waiting for
the explosion she was so sure would come from her friends.
“Yep.” Tina answered just as slowly, wondering what
was wrong with Bette. She looks like she’s stepping onto a field full
of landmines, Tina mused. When Bette finally left to go to the
counter, Tina relaxed in her chair, “Hi girls!”
“Hi Tina. What did you do to Bette? She looks a
little weird this morning.” Alice finally looked up from her magazine
and smiled widely.
Of course she knew why Bette was acting strange. In
fact, everyone was shocked when they saw Bette and Tina walking towards
The Planet together, but Alice had quickly ordered everyone to not make
a big deal out of it. She didn’t want Bette to have the impression,
however correct it may be, that she was being observed and scrutinized
like a prize lab rat. So Alice, Dana, Shane, and nearly everyone in the
cafe pretended it was nothing out of the ordinary that Bette the
Recluse was apparently going to have breakfast with Tina. Yes, everyone
knows Tina, Alice observed with a perverse sort of pride.
Tina glanced around, wondering why the usual level
of noise in the small place was noticably muted. Instead of speaking or
yelling behind newspapers or around coffee mugs like they usually did,
the patrons of The Planet were leaning over their tables and whispering.
“What’s going on?” She asked suspiciously.
“Alice told everyone to act normal coz she didn’t
want to creep Bette out.” Dana answered, downing a huge gulp of her
shake.
“Yeah. So act normal.” Shane pretended to be stern but her eyes were twinkling wildy.
At the counter, Bette was smiling widely at Kit, who raised an eyebrow.
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(70 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Our Betty did grow up, and Tina story started it. Watch out world Bette Porter is back. thanks
Bette is sooo adorable!
im luvin it!
im haviang so much fun with this story. the way you describe bette and tina especially. i couldl just see bette, panting trying not to have a panic attack. lmao thanks
this is so cool… tina as the hunter… i love it…please continue
I so love this story!
i don’t know what drew me to read your story, but i have and all of them in one shot… bloody brillant, very funny. One quick question ( if you wish), where does 7pm come from? Looking forward to the ensuing chapters…shortly?!! Hopefully.
Good chapter. Love your Bette and Tina and let see what’s next, thanks!
3 beers huh…. you’d be a great date!!! Your answer to 7pm leaves me with more questions… but I’ll just remain curious. Cheers luv.
poor bette…I just glad she can get out of the house.
great update!!!!!!!!!! bring it on post soon
At this point in time this is such a great story to wake up to..fun,light,comical, you write this change in characters so well…I’m trying to avoid all the bs that I know will follow with errr tina being a….bu t until then pls post soon…tks
Thanks for posted that was great OMG! Bette really shock that maybe she is the ONE Tina talking about LOL! OK! I’m Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
f*ck, this is the last chapter. i just read four straight and now it’s over. wah!
Bette, Dr.Techie says: pop a Xanax before your date tonight…and lean back, lean back. This anxiety disorder thing seems to be working for her, though. She’s managed to captivate Weho’s most famous courtesan, and it makes for an amusing read for the rest of us. Thanks for starting my day off on a comical note! BTW – I’ll have the meatlover’s breakfast with coffee and orange juice. You can hold that vegan shake for the next person. Thanks!
I just love how Tina (and you) are handling Bette. Bette is so nervous, yet giddy, it’s fun to watch. so unusual for such a strong woman.
and life goes on and bette is growing up and tina is the one who’s changing it all….and i can’t stop giggling, love this story
Hi all! I’m sorry I couldn’t post the next chapter sooner. I’m too drunk right now to write anything, except this comment. I don’t drink often so 3 beers kinda hit me hard.7 pm came from what time it was when i registered to the forum :) fitting coz i was obsessed with 7 of 9 once upon a time.
I love this story. Hope u have many more chapters to go.
you make me smile with this story. Thank you so very much.