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I Fall Behind pt.11
“Hello there Bette,” Kit greeted her sister warmly, “You want your usual?”
“Hi Kit! Yes, my breakfast bagel and coffee please.
And a vegan protein shake.” Bette grinned, waiting for Kit’s reaction.
“So, you’re finally trying Dana’s drink huh? She
wear you down?” Kit chuckled as she poured out a tall glass of the
thick green liquid.
“Yuck! No, it’s not for me. It’s for…” Bette paused dramatically. “… someone.”
“Oh really?”
“Yes. She’s here with me. Over there, sitting with the gang.” Kit heard the odd note in Bette’s voice.
“You sound satisfied with yourself, little sis. Have a good date?” Kit teased.
Bette shook her head but smiled. “It was fine. But
Kit, look! She’s here. With me. Her name’s Tina Kennard. I brought her here. I didn’t throw her out, I didn’t scare her away, I didn’t bore her to death! She’s here! I brought her!”
“Hm. And you’re proud of that.”
“Of course I am!” Bette answered hotly. “Don’t you
think I know what people say about me? They say I’m a hermit, that I
don’t care for human beings, that I prefer to look at things diluted
through a camera lens or pigments of paint.”
“Huh. They say all that?”
“Well, not in so many words.” Bette felt
exasperated. She wanted Kit to be glad for her. She wanted her sister
to pat her on the back and congratulate her. “But here I am Kit.
I’m out here, with Tina.”
“You want people to stand up and clap for you, Bette?”
“What? No!” Bette flushed. “I just… isn’t this
something?” Bette indicated herself with outstretched palms. “Kit!
I’m… I’m normal!”
Kit sighed. Oh sister, sister, she thought. This is
one maggot you ought to shake out of your brain! I just can’t do it for
you, Kit thought sadly.
Kit just smiled and handed Bette her order. “There
you go baby sis. Your bagel, black coffee, and Tina’s protein shake.
It’s on the house.”
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(70 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Our Betty did grow up, and Tina story started it. Watch out world Bette Porter is back. thanks
Bette is sooo adorable!
im luvin it!
im haviang so much fun with this story. the way you describe bette and tina especially. i couldl just see bette, panting trying not to have a panic attack. lmao thanks
this is so cool… tina as the hunter… i love it…please continue
I so love this story!
i don’t know what drew me to read your story, but i have and all of them in one shot… bloody brillant, very funny. One quick question ( if you wish), where does 7pm come from? Looking forward to the ensuing chapters…shortly?!! Hopefully.
Good chapter. Love your Bette and Tina and let see what’s next, thanks!
3 beers huh…. you’d be a great date!!! Your answer to 7pm leaves me with more questions… but I’ll just remain curious. Cheers luv.
poor bette…I just glad she can get out of the house.
great update!!!!!!!!!! bring it on post soon
At this point in time this is such a great story to wake up to..fun,light,comical, you write this change in characters so well…I’m trying to avoid all the bs that I know will follow with errr tina being a….bu t until then pls post soon…tks
Thanks for posted that was great OMG! Bette really shock that maybe she is the ONE Tina talking about LOL! OK! I’m Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
f*ck, this is the last chapter. i just read four straight and now it’s over. wah!
Bette, Dr.Techie says: pop a Xanax before your date tonight…and lean back, lean back. This anxiety disorder thing seems to be working for her, though. She’s managed to captivate Weho’s most famous courtesan, and it makes for an amusing read for the rest of us. Thanks for starting my day off on a comical note! BTW – I’ll have the meatlover’s breakfast with coffee and orange juice. You can hold that vegan shake for the next person. Thanks!
I just love how Tina (and you) are handling Bette. Bette is so nervous, yet giddy, it’s fun to watch. so unusual for such a strong woman.
and life goes on and bette is growing up and tina is the one who’s changing it all….and i can’t stop giggling, love this story
Hi all! I’m sorry I couldn’t post the next chapter sooner. I’m too drunk right now to write anything, except this comment. I don’t drink often so 3 beers kinda hit me hard.7 pm came from what time it was when i registered to the forum :) fitting coz i was obsessed with 7 of 9 once upon a time.
I love this story. Hope u have many more chapters to go.
you make me smile with this story. Thank you so very much.