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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on February 1, 2018 by Valerie.
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    ”Can you hear the sounds? They’re far from freedom,” Shane wept in Bette’s arms. ”I know,” Bette said. ”Please get out of here, don’t let them…don’t…” the wounded woman sobbed. ”I love you,” Bette whispered as she kissed Shane’s temple. ”Thank you for everything.” A doctor, a nurse and two orderlies came running up to

    ”Can you hear the sounds? They’re far from freedom,” Shane wept in Bette’s arms.

    ”I know,” Bette said.

    ”Please get out of here, don’t let them…don’t…” the wounded woman sobbed.

    ”I love you,” Bette whispered as she kissed Shane’s temple. ”Thank you for everything.”

    A doctor, a nurse and two orderlies came running up to them just as Bette was helping Shane from the car.

    ”What happened?!” the doctor wanted to know.

    Bette watched in silence while the orderlies pushed a gurney, helping Shane onto it and covering her with blankets. When all of them disappeared hurriedly behind the glass doors, Bette jumped back into the car. There was one more thing she needed to do before everything ended.

    She glanced in her side-view mirror, trying to figure out how it all had gotten so out of control. The day had started so good, with Tina being there for her, and here she was several hours ago running away from the chasing police, having just dropped her heavily wounded friend, her only remaining friend, at the hospital. Everyone else seemed to have left her or betrayed her. She was alone in life now.

    Or could it even be called life, Bette thought. She had no life. She had lived for years simply existing, with moments of happiness from spending time with Tina, but lately it had been downright survival. Everything felt wrong, painful, acutely distressing. She didn’t want to fight anymore, didn’t have inner strength to. She was too broken.

    Turning the needed corner after never getting it out of low gear, Bette sped up before reaching the destination. She slammed on the brakes in the middle of the street and without bothering to turn off the engine bolted out of the car, rushing through the gate and towards the front door. She tried opening the door only to find out it was locked, so she began pounding on it. Not waiting for being welcomed inside, Bette hurried to the back yard, for she could hear faint sounds of voices and music coming from the back of the house.

    Once she got there her eyes searched wildly. In a second she spotted the one she was looking for, surrounded by a bunch of guests.

    ”Tina!” Bette yelled, racing to the unwitting girl.

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    1. Hi Valerie:

      OH, MY GOD, this chapter is amazing, and very hard for me, I needed a cup of tea and cookies to read it, during my lunch break in my job; you made it so real, like watching the movie.

      I think that finally, Bette touched bottom I hope she won’t fell farther, and she could start changing things, she needs to think in a wisdomly way; Arnodelo is looking for her, and her only choice is to make a deal with the prosecutor and give away Armodelo and his cartel and gang; she has some money she needs a very good attorney; she has to start thinking about a new begining with Tina, after she pays her bill to society (which I hope will be low, with the help of a lawyer) to the system; anyway, the people she killed were criminal, and she didn’t kill the girl, Miranda, that was killed by Dominic and Arnodelo.
      Wow, Valerie, the story is very good, I hope the end would be very good also.

      Thank you so much for the wonderful and spine-chilling chapter.

      I’ll be anxiously waiting for the next one, pps.

      P

    3. Hi,

      Great to have a new post but what a place to leave us!

      I repeat all proteonomics’s comments and appeal for another post as soon as possible.

      BTW Great to have you back pps.

      SG

    4. Wow! Thank you for an amazing yet very tearful (for me) chapter! I was hoping beyond hope that Bette was an undercover cop but it doesn’t look like it! Anxiously awaiting for next chapter! By the way you are a great writer!

    6. Hope, Tasha is alive – not to add to all other charges against Bette. Shane is a great friend indeed. And Tina is a bit of a disappointment to me. Maybe she is just too young to fight for her love. So its a big question, who will not let fall whom…
      Thanks for the great story! That’s definitely not the end yet, is it?

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