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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Before she had met Brenda, her current girlfriend of almost two years, she had had a short-term relationship, or rather a fling with Sam Makavejev, who now worked with her as a location manager and who she still remained friends with. Their affair hadn’t gone any further than sex, mainly due to Sam’s unwillingness to commit.

    ”Do you need a ride?” Sam asked, standing up.

    ”No, thanks. I’ll drive my car.”

    When Sam left, Tina collected her things into her purse and left as well. As she climbed into her car, her phone ringed.

    ”Hey baby, are you still at work?” Brenda’s voice spoke on the other side of the line.

    ”I’m pulling out of the parking lot. I’ll be at my parents’ place in fifteen minutes. Where’re you?”

    ”I’m there already! We’re all waiting for you.”

    ”Alright, see you in a bit, honey,” Tina said and hung up.

    She was driving through the relatively peaceful streets of Los Angeles when thoughts of Bette sidled their way into her mind again. It was becoming her unhealthy hobby, every time she had a spare moment to think of Bette, of the way Bette looked when they had met for the first time after all those years, of the way Bette had looked at her, of the many possible reasons why after two weeks Bette hadn’t called her yet.

    It was either Bette didn’t want to get in touch at all or she was taking her time to analyze the situation. After all she had always been that person, always trying to rationalize everything in her head, always creating complexity out of something that was perhaps pretty simple to others. By no means the rebirth of their relationship was a simple endeavor, but why wouldn’t Bette understand that no rationalization was needed when they were both involved? All she had to do to get all the answers was to make one call.

    Still, it was highly possible that Bette simply didn’t want to get in touch. Tina remembered that Bette had been accompanied by some woman at the store. Had she found herself a girlfriend already? Why wouldn’t she? She looked amazing, Tina thought to herself with a smile, even though the prospect of Bette having a girlfriend was bringing her emotional discomfort.

    Comments

    1. Zhenya says

      Great to see another chapter from you, thanks!

      Ok, so Tina has long-term girl (thanks god she’s not Helena), but she’s not in love in her. It’s good. What’s not so good that her parents obviously like her girlfriend. And what’s bad – how Bette was cold during their meeting and how quickly she left. I just hope Bette will agree for next meeting with Tina.

      So, waiting for the next!

    2. proteonomics says

      Hi Valerie

      Thank you for this wonderful chapter.

      Wow, it was very easy to vanish the ten years of separation between them; after trying to move on and make their lives with other people, just one encounter and their hidden feelings came back, it couldn’t be different, their love was very intense, a love forever.

      But if their love and life together ten years ago was hard due to Bette’s criminal life, and Tina’s fears and family situation; to pick up the pieces and glue them together now, won’t be easy.

      Thanks, Valerie for this wonderful and interesting story and please post soon.

      P

    3. Silentreader says

      WOW…
      caught me by surprise seeing the update of my fav story….
      but frankly 13 pages is not enough…lol… please update really soon.. can’t wait to see what will tina do to get back to bette’s life once again.. :-D
      by the way…thank you so much for keeping the story.. :-)

    4. MalisMom says

      Thank goodness, Helena is gone. I’m glad Sam is just friends with Tina. I don’t think I would have been able to stomach them together. LOL. Bette seems a lot more sexier, with her more bruting and mysterious self. I’m siding with Bette right now. Thank you so much for the update. I’ve been looking multiple times a day, since your last update.

    5. BnTinmyhead says

      Geez so heart wrenching. Tina seems on the out side to have moved on with her life but on the inside she’s a mess..Shes still living the next day ten years back when Bette told her to never come back…nothing has changed for her. Bette was in a bad place when she said it but she really didn’t mean it. She just didn’t want to hurt Tina or bring shame to her by being in that place. She loved her enough to let her go. The love is still there now if they can just get out of their own way and talk., they will find their love again. Thank you very much enjoying your story.

    6. majicspider60 says

      Wow, what a meeting! The tension is palpable from the page. I”m glad Tina kept in touch with Mrs. Carol and kept the property taxes paid. Now, how do they reconnect? Brenda is doomed to lose Tina. What an emotional ride? Keep posting and we will keep reading !

    7. Bibi28 says

      Oh wow Valerie, what a incredible good chapter!

      Most of the others already comment and said it all.

      Poor Tina, still so in love with Bette and then receiving such a coldness from Bette. But Bette is protecting her heart.

      Let their journey back together begin!

      Thanks for the update!

    8. Ycdany says

      Am I too greedy to longing for your other story while I am so attracted with this one? You are a fantastic writer, I am thrilled wtih either story you would serve us, thanks for the awsome chapter!

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