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I Will Not Let You Fall
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”What’re you planning to do?” Steve asked with a note of worry in his voice.
”I have no idea…” Tina whispered, her hazel eyes shimmering with a layer of glassy, unshed tears. ”All these feelings towards her… It’s like I’m experiencing them again, you know… They keep rising in my chest and I can’t stop thinking about her. It just feels so real and so intense, like it was back then… I don’t know what to do, Steve…” Tina wept softly.
”Shhh, it’s okay…” the man comforted, holding his upset sister in his strong arms.
”Oh my God! Baby?” Brenda emerged out of the house, causing Tina to push herself from her brother’s embrace and turn away as she rapidly began wiping her tears. ”Baby, are you crying?” Brenda asked with concern, standing behind Tina’s back. ”What happened?” she looked at Steve right away, but the man turned his back to her as well and didn’t respond.
”I’m fine, Brenda,” Tina spoke quietly, turning around.
”You were crying,” Brenda claimed, observing her girlfriend closely.
”I uh… I’ve had a bad day at work. That’s all.”
”But baby, you constantly have bad days at work. I don’t remember you ever crying over anything, let alone over a bad day at work.”
”Who’s crying?” Amy Kennard appeared on the porch. ”My sweet little muffin?” Amy walked up to her and pulled her into an embrace. ”Aww, my little pumpkin has had a bad day at work…”
Tina rolled her eyes. ”Mom, please stop with all the silly nicknames. I’m thirty two years old.”
”But you will always be a ten-year-old angel for me!” Amy cheered, grinning lovingly at her daughter.
”Baby, I’m worried about you,” Brenda said as all four of them made their way into the house. ”You’re stressed. You need to take a few days off.”
”I can’t right now. The production is having difficult times.”
”Damn that production for making my little muffin upset,” Amy grumbled playfully.
”Who hurt my little girl? They will deal with her daddy,” Albert Kennard jested, walking toward Tina with a warm smile. He hugged her tightly as well.
Tina heaved a sigh. Not only she was exhausted because of her work and troubled by her ex-lover’s reappearance, but also overwhelmed by her family’s excessive love, which was to be welcomed any other day, only not today when all she needed was some peaceful time alone.
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Great to see another chapter from you, thanks!
Ok, so Tina has long-term girl (thanks god she’s not Helena), but she’s not in love in her. It’s good. What’s not so good that her parents obviously like her girlfriend. And what’s bad – how Bette was cold during their meeting and how quickly she left. I just hope Bette will agree for next meeting with Tina.
So, waiting for the next!
Hi Valerie
Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
Wow, it was very easy to vanish the ten years of separation between them; after trying to move on and make their lives with other people, just one encounter and their hidden feelings came back, it couldn’t be different, their love was very intense, a love forever.
But if their love and life together ten years ago was hard due to Bette’s criminal life, and Tina’s fears and family situation; to pick up the pieces and glue them together now, won’t be easy.
Thanks, Valerie for this wonderful and interesting story and please post soon.
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Thanks for post.ing another chapter. I really enjoy this story. Looking forward to your next update.
WOW…
caught me by surprise seeing the update of my fav story….
but frankly 13 pages is not enough…lol… please update really soon.. can’t wait to see what will tina do to get back to bette’s life once again.. :-D
by the way…thank you so much for keeping the story.. :-)
I wonder why Bette is so hesistant to pick up where she and Tina left off. This story is so good. PPVS
Thank goodness, Helena is gone. I’m glad Sam is just friends with Tina. I don’t think I would have been able to stomach them together. LOL. Bette seems a lot more sexier, with her more bruting and mysterious self. I’m siding with Bette right now. Thank you so much for the update. I’ve been looking multiple times a day, since your last update.
Geez so heart wrenching. Tina seems on the out side to have moved on with her life but on the inside she’s a mess..Shes still living the next day ten years back when Bette told her to never come back…nothing has changed for her. Bette was in a bad place when she said it but she really didn’t mean it. She just didn’t want to hurt Tina or bring shame to her by being in that place. She loved her enough to let her go. The love is still there now if they can just get out of their own way and talk., they will find their love again. Thank you very much enjoying your story.
Thank you Valerie for the update, I just love this story. My heart aches for them both and hope they find away back to each other.
Wow, what a meeting! The tension is palpable from the page. I”m glad Tina kept in touch with Mrs. Carol and kept the property taxes paid. Now, how do they reconnect? Brenda is doomed to lose Tina. What an emotional ride? Keep posting and we will keep reading !
Oh wow Valerie, what a incredible good chapter!
Most of the others already comment and said it all.
Poor Tina, still so in love with Bette and then receiving such a coldness from Bette. But Bette is protecting her heart.
Let their journey back together begin!
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update.
Tina’s life seems to be lacking a lot. Hopefully the two of them can see a way to find each other again.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Thanks for the update.
Love this story and am longing for Tibette to be back together. Look forward to you achieving my wish!
PPS
SG
Am I too greedy to longing for your other story while I am so attracted with this one? You are a fantastic writer, I am thrilled wtih either story you would serve us, thanks for the awsome chapter!
My dear readers, thank you for all the wonderful comments and for encouraging me to keep writing! I really appreciate all of your support on my work!
You are a very good writer. We are fortunate to have you on this site! Keep blessing us with your work!
You never cease to amaze me with your ideas. This story is one I cannot forget. Please don’t stop posting.
It’s been awhile without a new chapter of this story…please…please…please….give us happiness with a progress of Bette and Tina’s relationship…thank you a bunch for sharing the story with us..????