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If I Fall: Chapter 10
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"What?" Jules caught Alice staring at her with a silly grin on her face.
"Nothing," smiled Alice.
"Bullshit, you were totally staring at me. Is there something wrong with my hair? Is it doing that poofy thing again?" Jules adjusted the rear view mirror and began to check her hair until Alice grabbed her hand and pulled her in for a kiss.
Jules was the first to break away. "Mmm, what was that for birthday girl?"
"For being so adorable."
"Honey, kittens are adorable. I want to be hot!"
Alice looked her over and licked her lips. "Trust me, you’ve managed to pull that off as well."
Jules smiled and placed a light kiss on Alice’s lips. "Now come on, you can’t be late to your own birthday party."
Alice eyed her suspiciously as they both got out of the car. "I thought this was a birthday ‘gathering’, not a party."
"Gathering, party…same thing."
"Julianna, is this the surprise party I told everyone that I didn’t want?"
Jules stepped closer to Alice and took both her hands, leading her closer to the house. "Sweetheart, even if it was, we all knew you secretly wanted it, but were too pig-headed to admit it."
Alice scoffed at this but kissed her just the same. "You’re lucky I like you."
"This is true. Now come on, your friends are waiting."
"How many friends exactly?"
"Nice try, Pieszecki. Now let’s go!"
"You know, for someone that’s never met any of my friends before, you sure don’t seem the least bit nervous."
"Psst. Did you forget who you were talking to? I have nerves of steel."
"Ha! I guess those nerves of steel have been on vacation since we met, huh?"
"No…I guess you’re just so beautiful that it makes me nervous," chided Jules and nudged Alice and the writer rang the rather loud doorbell.
"Okay smart ass. We’ll see how cool you are when Bette and Tina start grilling you about your past relationships."
"Wait, I missed the memo about past relationships being fair game…"
Alice wiggled her eyebrows and smirked at Jules’ worried look. Their playful little game was interrupted however, when Helena’s butler greeted and informed them that the ladies had gathered out back. He led them through the house to the sliding glass doors that opened onto Helena’s backyard veranda overlooking the beach.
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Bradshaw approves highly of this chapter :D I’m agreeing with muted about that hug, if danish think they can have a platonic friendship I think they are madly mistaken, Jules is gonna get his heart broken, yes I put his on purpose because I still believe he’s hiding a penis in there somewhere, that’s why he and Alice haven’t had sex, he doesn’t want his secret revealed :P Am i right? This was a cliffhanger, I really wanna know what Alice and Dana say to each other now lady, bad you for making me needy! However it could go terribly wrong and they end up arguing, or will they actually communicate and tell each other what’s going on? Will Jules catch them? PPS so I can let out a sigh of relief when I read a glimmer of hope for danish :)
I’m feeling awfully needy too. I didn’t even think about them possibly having an argument – but things seem to spiral out of control quickly with our beloved danish. Jules seems so good for Alice, but her unfinished business with Dana is going to leave her in the cold eventually. I like how Jules reacted to Dana. She’s not going to let Alice go without a fight, but Alice’s heart is elsewhere. Imagine if Lara was at the party. She wouldn’t have appreciated that not so little hug. Maybe Jules and Lara can get together.I was psyched to see that you updated so quickly, but I was tempted to delay reading because with your busy schedule – who knows when you’ll have time to update again. You aren’t too overworked right now, are you? lol
Great chapter as always. You portray and develop the characters so perfectly. I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds and hopefully it will be a looong happy one :P Thansk for such great writing. Post soon!
ah man – you’re gonna leave it there. well ok – more to look forward to in the next post. thanks. that was cute.
this is such a great story. you’ve got alice down to a T! i love it. i’m feeling sorry for dana,and nervous for alice and jules. can’t wait to see what happens next.
LOL @ Alice kissing Jules’ eyelid on the first date. No matter how Jules tries to mark her territory, though, I have this distinct feeling that she’s going to be left out in the cold… there’s too much left undone between Al and Dana for her to be able to stop it. Liked the chapter a lot, swiss, post soon!
I loved the tension bewteen Alice and Dana. The talk can go either way (and is probably more likely to end in an argument), but as long they have chemistry I’m fine with it. :)
This is a great I can’t wait for more
The Eternal Hug, eh? Nice. And Jealous Jules is pretty awesome, too. I feel bad for her though, it’s so obvious that Dana and Alice are nowhere close to being over each other. And I’m with you, the new season is making me adore Helacious times a thousand. I just hope the show writers realize what a good thing it’d be. Knowing them, though, we’ll have to depend on fanfic. Anyway: Danish good.
“Pain in the ass, Yoda is,” – that made me smile. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Lovely thank you. PPS