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If I Fall: Chapter 10
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And sure enough, as soon as Alice made up her mind to put Dana out of it, the tennis player entered Alice’s line of vision holding a small wrapped box and looking simply breathtaking in her pale yellow sundress. Luckily Jules was busy chatting with Shane, Carmen and Jenny, and they had all fortunately missed that Alice’s breath had caught in her throat as she stared longingly at her ex-girlfriend. Alice was caught red-handed by Dana, however, as the athlete acknowledged the expression on Alice’s face and returned it with a similar one of her own.
Dana couldn’t believe how truly exquisite Alice looked. In a dark green dress that fell just below the knee as its neckline plunged just low enough to expose the space between her breasts, Alice was an image not to be forgotten. Dana noticed that even Alice’s hair, which was just about shoulder length now, looked incredible as a few pieces covered her left eye. It wasn’t until Alice quickly looked away and turned her attention to the striking blonde next to her that Dana realized she was openly gawking at the birthday girl and unable to move a muscle. She sighed to herself, ran a hand through her hair, and shakily made her way over to Alice and the rest of their friends.
Meanwhile, the writer did her best to concentrate on anything but Dana, who she could see out of the corner of her eye, getting closer by the second. She locked her arm through Jules’ and tightly squeezed her hand, bracing herself for the impending encounter. Alice wasn’t necessarily trying to avoid Dana, but after seeing how good the athlete looked she was sure that her face would somehow give that away to everyone around her, especially Jules.
Dana noticed Alice stiffen as she got closer. And she also noticed Alice holding hands with the blonde standing beside her. This was enough to nearly make Dana turn around and run right out of there, but she reminded herself that she was there to start mending their tattered friendship and the only way to do that was to follow Shane’s advice and make the first move.
"Hey guys."
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Bradshaw approves highly of this chapter :D I’m agreeing with muted about that hug, if danish think they can have a platonic friendship I think they are madly mistaken, Jules is gonna get his heart broken, yes I put his on purpose because I still believe he’s hiding a penis in there somewhere, that’s why he and Alice haven’t had sex, he doesn’t want his secret revealed :P Am i right? This was a cliffhanger, I really wanna know what Alice and Dana say to each other now lady, bad you for making me needy! However it could go terribly wrong and they end up arguing, or will they actually communicate and tell each other what’s going on? Will Jules catch them? PPS so I can let out a sigh of relief when I read a glimmer of hope for danish :)
I’m feeling awfully needy too. I didn’t even think about them possibly having an argument – but things seem to spiral out of control quickly with our beloved danish. Jules seems so good for Alice, but her unfinished business with Dana is going to leave her in the cold eventually. I like how Jules reacted to Dana. She’s not going to let Alice go without a fight, but Alice’s heart is elsewhere. Imagine if Lara was at the party. She wouldn’t have appreciated that not so little hug. Maybe Jules and Lara can get together.I was psyched to see that you updated so quickly, but I was tempted to delay reading because with your busy schedule – who knows when you’ll have time to update again. You aren’t too overworked right now, are you? lol
Great chapter as always. You portray and develop the characters so perfectly. I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds and hopefully it will be a looong happy one :P Thansk for such great writing. Post soon!
ah man – you’re gonna leave it there. well ok – more to look forward to in the next post. thanks. that was cute.
this is such a great story. you’ve got alice down to a T! i love it. i’m feeling sorry for dana,and nervous for alice and jules. can’t wait to see what happens next.
LOL @ Alice kissing Jules’ eyelid on the first date. No matter how Jules tries to mark her territory, though, I have this distinct feeling that she’s going to be left out in the cold… there’s too much left undone between Al and Dana for her to be able to stop it. Liked the chapter a lot, swiss, post soon!
I loved the tension bewteen Alice and Dana. The talk can go either way (and is probably more likely to end in an argument), but as long they have chemistry I’m fine with it. :)
This is a great I can’t wait for more
The Eternal Hug, eh? Nice. And Jealous Jules is pretty awesome, too. I feel bad for her though, it’s so obvious that Dana and Alice are nowhere close to being over each other. And I’m with you, the new season is making me adore Helacious times a thousand. I just hope the show writers realize what a good thing it’d be. Knowing them, though, we’ll have to depend on fanfic. Anyway: Danish good.
“Pain in the ass, Yoda is,” – that made me smile. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Lovely thank you. PPS