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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"You sure like sneaking up on me lately," Dana nervously laughed as she tore her eyes away from the writer’s.
"Ugh, I’m sorry, Dane. I probably shouldn’t have done that. I promise I won’t be a distraction for you ever again."
Dana couldn’t help but smile at the serious tone Alice was taking and how adorably apprehensive she seemed. "That’s impossible, Al. You’re a distraction for me no matter what you do." Alice rolled her eyes and smiled back at Dana, who could feel the color rising up in her cheeks as Alice chuckled and helped her to her feet.
"What are you doing here?"
Well, I was hoping we could talk. I guess it could wait though, I know how busy you are prepping for that tournament."
"Dana," Mike interrupted, "are we working on your backhand or taking a coffee break?"
Dana sighed and asked him to give her 5 minutes, to which he begrudgingly obliged.
"So…what’s up?" Dana asked as she led Alice over to the bench beside the court and began wiping her forehead and chest with a towel. This of course made Alice lose all rational thought as she bit her bottom lip and drank in the hot, perspiring Dana Fairbanks before her. "Al?"
"Hmm? Oh, yeah right." She cleared her throat and sighed, trying her best to focus on anything other than the current fantasy playing on repeat in her head. A fantasy that included having her way with Dana right there on the bench. "I uh, I guess I just wanted to make sure you were okay with everything that’s been going on lately."
"I’m not sure I understand."
"I mean with us." Alice immediately noticed Dana’s face brighten at the mention of the word "us". "And with me and Jules." And then she saw Dana’s face drop just as quickly. "I couldn’t help but notice that you get sort of…I don’t know, jumpy, every time Jules enters the room and I wanted to make sure you didn’t have a problem with her. Because if you do Dane, well…then you and I have a problem."
"We do?"
"Well, do you not like her or something?"
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )