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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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Alice wasn’t content with all these unanswered questions rummaging through her head, and she resolved to go to the source herself and find out exactly what Dana’s problem was. She hoped that she was just making too much out of it and Dana would laugh off all of her concerns. But on the other hand, she couldn’t get Harriet’s words out of her head. Was it true? Was Dana still in love with her?
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The Country Club
Instead of lying down like she knew she should, Dana decided to head straight back into her workout, running directly to the locker room at the country club, picking up her stuff and heading out to the courts. Her new coach, Mike, was already there waiting for her as she re-laced her sneakers, grabbed a racquet and started working on her serve.
This went on for another hour or so, the practice varying between service exercises, net exercises, and backhand volleys. Currently, Mike was feeding the ball machine on the far court and aiming for the near court which was where Dana stood. And despite the trouble she was having with her concentration this morning, she’d finally found her groove and was completely engrossed in the task at hand. Although to Dana, this was not nearly enough. While she finally got her head into the game, it seemed that the rest of her body refused to follow suit.
"Fuck!" she shouted as her shot went just wide of the line.
"Let’s go Dana, you’re completely dropping your backhand on these volleys," Mike scolded as the next ball soared over the net.
Dana grunted and shook her head in frustration and she stepped into the shot and propelled the ball over the net, just over the base line. "Yeah I know Mike, thanks for the encouragement."
"I’m not here to coddle you, Fairbanks, that’s not why you hired me. If you want to rank high enough to bypass the preliminary rounds of the tournament next week, I suggest you get your head out of the clouds."
Dana felt her frustration and ire about to boil over inside of her as she hit the next ball right into the net. No matter how hard she concentrated, she just couldn’t get her game going. "Fuck!"
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )