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    If I Fall: Chapter 15

    Story written on March 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Danish, Danish and more Danish. Yay, I’m back.

     

    "Get your mind off your lady problems and back into the game," Mike yelled to her.

     

    "I don’t have…," she grunted, as she put her entire body into the next shot, "…lady problems."

     

    As soon as Dana finally returned the ball properly, something in the distance behind her grabbed Mike’s attention. It was a woman who seemed to be getting closer and closer to the court, a woman he’d never seen before, and who he eyed curiously. The only woman he’d met in Dana’s life had been the tall redheaded Lara person, but this woman looked nothing like that. Her light brown, blondish hair fell in wavy locks just below her shoulders. And while she was shorter than the redhead, she carried herself with much more confidence and conviction.

     

    "Actually," he replied slowly and raised his brows, "I think you do."

     

    Dana was completely unaware of just what Mike was alluding to as she continued to hit the balls flying towards her with as much determination as she could muster. However, she was starting to get just a bit pissed off at Mike and his big mouth.

     

    "Mike, lay the fuck off me," she yelled after returning the ball directly to his chest.  

     

    "Damn, you kiss your mother with that mouth?" Alice teased, deciding it was time to make Dana aware of her presence. Recognizing her voice, the athlete abruptly stopped what she was doing and whirled around to face her. Unfortunately, she was so shocked to see Alice standing on the other side of the fence that she completely forgot the ball machine was still on and firing straight for her. Just as Dana was about to find out why Alice was there, a rather fast, rather hard tennis ball hit her square on the back of the head and knocked her to the floor.

     

    Alice instinctually opened her mouth and placed her hand over it as she ran towards the fallen athlete. And for his part, Mike just stood there shaking his head in agitation.

     

    "Oh my God, Dana…are you alright?" Alice asked as she knelt beside Dana on the court, hovering over her and placing her left hand gently behind the athlete’s head. As she brushed the hair out of Dana’s eyes with her free hand, the athlete took the opportunity to grab it and look up at her intently. They stayed in silence that way for a moment before Alice broke the trance they were in and asked her once more if she was alright.

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    3. I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx

    5. uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.

    9. i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS

    10. I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.

    13. This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )

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