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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

     

    "Dana, no. I can’t just pretend that the past few months haven’t existed, that you didn’t leave me when I needed you the most."

     

    Dana shut her eyes and grabbed Alice’s other hand so that she had a hold of both of them. "Alice I’m not asking you to forget. But you have to know that I will do whatever I can to make it up to you. It was the biggest mistake of my life, and not a day goes by where I don’t regret it."

     

    "What do you want me to say to that, Dana? That it’s great you realize now you made a mistake? That I should just focus on that and pretend the indescribable hurt and abandon I felt were just unfortunate consequences in your reckless attempt to figure out what the hell you really want in life? Oh well, as long as she says she was wrong before, she must get it now and won’t ever leave me again. I mean, what? Should I just forget everything and make myself trust you because you realize you made a mistake? It doesn’t work like that Dana. I’m not about to take the chance that you’ll change your mind again and leave. No. I can’t let you back in, you’ll just hurt me again."

     

    "Alice!" Dana pleaded, still clinging to her hands and squeezing them to emphasize her point. "Please believe me, I’d never leave you again. I’m telling you that I realize what a mistake I made the last time to show you that I know now running away isn’t the answer. And it sure as hell didn’t get me what I want. I’ve spent my whole life denying myself happiness because of irrational fears, and I’m done doing that. And please don’t tell me it’s too late for us, because it’s not, it just can’t be. I won’t accept that. If it means spending the rest of my life alone, trying to make you see that we belong together, then so be it. But I won’t run away from us, or from our problems. I want to face them, Alice…together." Through her pleas, Dana had wrapped her arms around the writer and was now clutching onto her for dear life.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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