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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

     

    Alice felt Dana move even closer and her breathing began to grow heavier, to an almost labored pace. With her eyes still closed, she felt Dana’s face inch nearer, and her lips making light, tentative contact with her cheek. Alice swallowed hard and managed to squeak out "What are you doing?" in a nearly inaudible whisper.  

     

    "I may not be good with words, but I never had a problem showing you how I felt," Dana whispered back and she slowly moved her face away from Alice’s before moving back in and passionately capturing the writer’s lips with her own. Alice’s eyes immediately shot open to make sure her body wasn’t betraying her and this was really happening. But when she opened them to see Dana’s eyes closed, kissing her with everything she was, she knew this was real. She closed her eyes once again, trying her best to match the force of Dana’s impassioned lips, involuntarily letting out a breathy moan, which was quickly swallowed up by the brunette’s inviting mouth.

     

    And then everything fell away for them both. Not one coherent thought entered either one of their heads, as both bodies were abuzz with the sheer joy and desperation they felt being back in each other’s arms. Alice’s mind was in overdrive, feeling light-headed and overwhelmed by the familiar feel of being this way with Dana again. Kissing her had always set her heart on fire and put her body in pure bliss. And she never believed that one person could be her "home", but kissing Dana again made her change her beliefs entirely. Her body was now moving independently from her brain as she tangled her hands in Dana’s hair and inched up on her tippy toes to gain momentum and somehow get closer to the athlete.

     

    Dana was busy reveling in the feel of Alice’s mouth on hers as their tongues began to duel for dominance, swirling around in a hysteria of sensuality and emotion. It was almost too much for Dana to handle, but again, she couldn’t form one thought in this moment, and God help her if the thought would be to pull away.

     

    However, Alice’s brain must have started functioning somewhere along the line as she was the first to hesitantly pull away.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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