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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

      

    "Dana, wait," she panted. The athlete just stood there, gasping for air in her own right and waiting for Alice to continue, but wanting desperately to shut her up by kissing her once more.

     

    For a minute Alice didn’t say a word, nor did she move a muscle. And just as Dana was about to grab her and suck the life out of her once again, the writer moved her hand over her swollen lips and mumbled beneath it. "We can’t do this."

     

    "What? Why?" Dana was hardly thinking rationally at this point. In fact, she was hardly thinking at all. The only thing her body was telling her was that she had to be touching Alice once again and never let her go.

     

    "Well for one, you’re drunk."

     

    "Not drunk enough to know what I want Al…what I’ve wanted this whole time. Isn’t this what you want too?"

     

    "No," she answered defiantly before softening, "I mean, ah, I don’t know," she stuttered as she tried to regain her composure, taking a deep breath in hopes of doing just that. "God this is so hard."

     

    "It doesn’t have to be Al," Dana reasoned as she took the writer’s hand in her own. "You just have to let it happen and we can be together."

     

    "I can’t."

     

    "You can. We can. Look, I know I fucked things up before. But I want to be the woman you deserve, Alice. Please, I just need your help. We can do this…you just have to give me one more chance. I’m not gonna run this time. This is it for me, Al. You’re it for me." She ended the thought in a whisper, but Alice could tell that Dana’s eyes were basically pleading with her to concede. And a part of her wanted to. A part of her wanted to stop denying that irrefutable passion between them and let Dana take her into the bedroom, where they would make up for lost times until the sun came up. But the other part of her, the part that still remained wounded from being left by the woman she thought she’d spend the rest of her life with…that part just wouldn’t give in.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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