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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

     

    "I’m sorry. I’ll be fifteen minutes, twenty tops. I just have to go pick her drunk ass up and drop her back at the condo, and I’ll come right back here. Will you wait for me?"

     

    "I don’t know, Alice. We should probably just call it a night." She stood up to retrieve her pants from the floor but Alice placed a hand on her arm.

     

    "Wait, come on. The night doesn’t have to end. Not like this, at least. It’s just a minor interruption, that’s all. I’ll be back before you know it and we can pick up right where we left off." She moved in to place a kiss on Jules’ lips, but the blonde turned away before any contact was made. "Hey. What is it?" Alice asked as she placed a single finger under Jules’ chin and turned her face back to meet her own.

     

    "It just seems like Dana’s always going to be an interruption for us, one way or another."

     

    "What the hell does that mean?"

     

    "I think you know. Unfortunately, it took me awhile, but I’m finally starting to figure it out myself." She broke away from Alice’s grasp and finished getting dressed, and all the writer could do was stand there and watch. She was unsure of what to say, and at this point, if any words would even make any difference. How could a night with such promise have turned into this in five minutes time? And despite asking herself the question in the first place, she knew the answer without even giving it a second thought—Dana. Once again, Dana managed to interfere with Alice’s moving-on process. And after the way things went between them this afternoon, she had the nerve to give the bartender Alice’s number? Enough was enough. After all the recent progress she had made with living her own life, in a healthy, independent way, Dana had the gall to keep sucking her back in to this twisted mess between them? It was like for every two steps forward that she took, the athlete pulled her back three steps more. How was she supposed to get on with her life if Dana just wouldn’t let her? This had to stop, and Alice was determined to stop it tonight.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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