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If I Fall: Chapter 17
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"Dana, knock it off. Let’s go, okay."
Dana’s face turned somber as she registered that Alice was serious. Yet, she couldn’t help but smile when she realized how beautiful the writer actually did look. Not wanting to piss her off anymore than she already seemed, Dana silently waved goodbye to her new friends and followed the writer out of the door.
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Dana’s Condo
"Give me the keys," Alice said, not making eye contact with the athlete, instead holding her hand out and looking directly at the door. Dana knew she was in no state to contemplate Alice’s mood, but she wasn’t that drunk…something was definitely off. She wasn’t just being drunk and paranoid, Alice seemed genuinely pissed at her. But why? She couldn’t remember what happened ten minutes ago, let alone the last time they spoke that would make Alice so angry. Never did it occur to her that she interrupted what she actually interrupted between Alice and Jules.
Dana fumbled noisily through her bag for her keys and finally found them, holding them up in the air and yelling "Ah-hah!"
Alice just shook her head, more irritated with each passing second, and grabbed them from Dana in order to open the front door.
Once inside, the athlete plopped down on the couch and looked up at Alice with her big blue eyes. "Sit down, Al!"
"Dana, I’m not here to hang out. I told the bartender I’d get you home safely, and now I have, so…goodnight."
"Wait!" She practically tripped over her own feet in her haste to get up off the couch and stop Alice from leaving. "Don’t go, please. I don’t want to be alone."
Alice scoffed and shook her head once again. "So go call Lara. Remember her, your girlfriend? You know, the one who should be here doing this instead of me."
Dana’s face immediately turned somber as she dropped her head and mumbled something incoherent under her breath.
"Huh?" Alice asked.
"I said she’s gone. She left me. Lara, I mean."
"Wait, what do you mean she’s gone? Gone on vacation or something?"
"Yeah, sure, a vacation. A very long vacation from dealing with me and all my issues." She returned to her position on the couch.
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awesome. i am so excited to see what happens next.
Oh man my heart is breakin here, this was a great chapter!!, I hope Dana doesn’t give up though, thanks for the post!!
Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?
Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.
Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.
First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.
Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!
Wow that was just perfect I can’t wait to see wat happens next
Ouch you are killing me here. PPS. You can’t leave us hanging like that, not nice.
I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx
damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D
fanfrikintastic!!!!!
And so it begins…Love this…you have definately captured Danish Angst…Dana needs to really step it up! Great Chapter! PPS!
simply put – well done!
that was great I just hope that dana will keep fighting for alice they so belong together please post soon I love it great update
wow so good loved it..great work:)