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If I Fall: Chapter 17
"Jules, wait." No response. At least not a verbal one, as the blonde turned around to face Alice, but said not a word. Their eyes locked and they both held the gaze for a few moments. Alice opened her mouth as if to say something, but closed it when Jules slowly shook her head and turned away from her, walking right out of the room. The writer sighed dejectedly and chased after her. "Jules, come on…don’t just leave like this." But the blonde was already out the door and headed for the stairwell. "Julianna," Alice tried once more, but to no avail. She just kept on walking until she reached her car, peeling out of the parking lot before she had a chance to change her mind.
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Milk
Dana was seated at the bar, talking rather loudly to two very nice, very butch women next to her. From what the athlete gathered, they were a couple, partners of ten years, on vacation from Ohio for the week, and both huge fans of women’s tennis. While they only had the intentions of approaching Dana for an autograph and maybe a picture at most, the modest celebrity invited them to sit down and do a few shots with her before they went home for the night. And of course they would never dare refuse sharing a few drinks with their favorite professional lesbian athlete, this of course being the epitome of what they thought having a " Hollywood" experience should be.
But after three more rounds, the women began to question just how "professional" Dana Fairbanks was being. Once Gina had informed her that she was cut off, the athlete began yelling at her, alleging that she was insulting her and her new friends from the Midwest. This didn’t do much to convince Gina otherwise, but the rather sloppy, rather loud words coming from Dana’s mouth were enough to motivate the bartender to call a cab. Of course, this plan failed miserably when Dana first refused to leave, and then when Gina asked her what address she should give to the driver, Dana just laughed giddily to herself and shouted defiantly that she belonged to Alice Pieszecki and wasn’t leaving until Alice came and rightfully claimed her.
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(46 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
awesome. i am so excited to see what happens next.
Oh man my heart is breakin here, this was a great chapter!!, I hope Dana doesn’t give up though, thanks for the post!!
Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?
Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.
Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.
First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.
Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!
Wow that was just perfect I can’t wait to see wat happens next
Ouch you are killing me here. PPS. You can’t leave us hanging like that, not nice.
I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx
damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D
fanfrikintastic!!!!!
And so it begins…Love this…you have definately captured Danish Angst…Dana needs to really step it up! Great Chapter! PPS!
simply put – well done!
that was great I just hope that dana will keep fighting for alice they so belong together please post soon I love it great update
wow so good loved it..great work:)