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If I Fall: Chapter 17
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Persistent in her attempts to get Dana out of the bar, Gina managed to get both Alice’s numbers and relentlessly call until she agreed to come pick the athlete up. In the meantime, the couple who had gotten much more then they bargained for began exchanging nervous glances with each other and explained to Dana that it was getting late and they should be going.
And it was at that point that Alice walked into Milk, wearing a furrowed brow and a scornful look on her face. She spotted Dana at the bar immediately, by far the loudest, most animated one in there, which Alice noted was extremely atypical of her. Although, when Dana got hold of a bottle of tequila, there was nothing typical in her behavior. Alice knew she was in for a seriously intoxicated Dana and she determinedly marched over to the bar and tapped Dana on the shoulder.
"Let’s go."
Dana immediately ceased her obnoxiously ear-splitting version of "Jesse’s Girl", the current song playing on the jukebox, when she heard the familiar voice behind her. Her mouth curved instantaneously into a smile and she abruptly turned to face Alice who was now standing before her.
"Alice!" Dana exclaimed, with as much enthusiasm as the writer had ever heard come from her, and threw her arms around the writer in a monstrous embrace.
Alice removed Dana’s arms from around her neck and took a step back. "Come on, we’re leaving. Gina, thanks for all your help."
Gina just nodded and continued to pour a beer at the other end of the bar.
"Wait, Aaaaaaallllll, I don’t want to leave yet."
"Dana, I really don’t care what you want right now. Let’s go." Alice slipped her arm through the athlete’s and began to walk towards the door.
"No! Wait, we have to do a shot. Let’s do a shot. Come on, it’ll be fun. Oooh, you have to meet my new friends. They’re biiiiiiig fans and they’re here all the way from Oklahoma…or Iowa. I don’t know, one of those." Dana contorted her face in an attempt to remember which state the couple said they were from. "Whatever, anyway, come on. Relax, take your coat off, stay awhile." Dana began removing Alice’s jacket from her shoulders and suddenly stopped when she saw the dress Alice was wearing underneath. "Woah, Al. You look….amazing. Why are you all dressed up? Is it to see me? Did you get dressed up for me? You look fucking hot, no one better hit on you tonight, or—"
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awesome. i am so excited to see what happens next.
Oh man my heart is breakin here, this was a great chapter!!, I hope Dana doesn’t give up though, thanks for the post!!
Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?
Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.
Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.
First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.
Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!
Wow that was just perfect I can’t wait to see wat happens next
Ouch you are killing me here. PPS. You can’t leave us hanging like that, not nice.
I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx
damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D
fanfrikintastic!!!!!
And so it begins…Love this…you have definately captured Danish Angst…Dana needs to really step it up! Great Chapter! PPS!
simply put – well done!
that was great I just hope that dana will keep fighting for alice they so belong together please post soon I love it great update
wow so good loved it..great work:)