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    If I Fall: Chapter 18

    Story written on April 13, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Danish stuff; Shane to the rescue, Alice re-commits herself–but to who?

     

    "What’s there left to say, Alice? It’s obvious she’s still in love with you, and maybe you’re not ready to admit it yet, but I’m pretty sure you feel the same way. So please tell me, what is there to talk about?"

     

    "I don’t know, us, maybe?"

     

    "Us? Alice, let’s not be so delusional. There is no us."

     

    "What are you talking about?" she asked in disbelief. 

     

    "Maybe you’ve been so wrapped up in your feelings for Dana that you’ve neglected to notice that what we have isn’t much of anything."

     

    "How can you say that? You know how I feel about you."

     

    "Yeah, you sure showed me last night."

     

    "That’s so not fair. I asked you to stay. I wanted you to stay. Dana needed my help, and if the roles were reversed, she’d have done it for me. I’m not going to apologize for being a good friend."

     

    "That’s fine. But what about apologizing for being a bad girlfriend?"

     

    Alice shook her head in hopes that the right words would come to her, but somehow, they just seemed to allude her. "I’m sorry," she whispered.

     

    "Yeah, so am I." She finally looked Alice square in the eye and for the first time the writer noticed the pained vulnerability reflected through Jules’ eyes. And it nearly killed her to think that she was the reason for it.

     

    "Look," Alice moved closer in order to close the space between them. "Let’s just go inside and talk about it, okay? I don’t want to just leave like this."

     

    "It’s okay Alice," Julianna shrugged. "You can go…consider yourself off the hook."

     

    "What? What the hell does that mean?" She stepped back in defeat.

     

    "You can go be with Dana. It’s obvious that’s where you really want to be."

     

    "First of all, don’t tell me where I want to be. I know what I want, Jules, so stop professing to know for me. Besides, why would you even say something like that?"

     

    "Because you won’t."

     

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    Back at Shane’s

    "Dana, no," Shane shot back, shaking her head emphatically.

     

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    1. Damn right she can…although the Julish reconciliation vexes me, mostly because I too am waiting for the other shoe to drop and Dana to get flat-out rejected and heartbroken. It’s wrong of me to want them to reconcile and be happy when they haven’t worked through their stuff, but dammit they freaking need to. Oh, and don’t feel obligated to post. I’m assuming you’ll be busy with law-school-esque things, and those take precedence over any type of Danish fiction. Think of your career! Wow, I’m really rambling. This is what not sleeping for three days will do to your brain.

    3. god i want alice to be happy she deserves it so much…and dana is it but i like jules too shes a great character..buuuuuut dana its always been dana and always will thats what i reckon anyway lol i love this story so much you write so well good job:)

    4. Someone has been busy writing! (yay for us readers – though I get the impression it is going to get worse for danish before it gets better…

    5. screw your career. POST soon dammit! man… i have a headache. I hear Alice and Shane talking and think- Dana really did foul this up– and i’m still not sure why- and what’s changed, really? why SHOULD Alice believe her– other than she really wants to and loves her. i’m mad at dana. but i also adore her and don’t want her heartbroken plus i know she is who Alice needs and wants…. see-this is why you need to post. i am looking forward to seeing how Dana handles seeing Alice with Jules that evening- i’ll wring her neck if she runs. : )

    6. i love this story. it’d be too much to hope that shane taped dana’s confession right? that’d be an asshole move, but alice needs to hear everything dana said. argh.

    7. The only thing I don’t like about each chapter of your story is that eventually each one ends. I just want them to go on and on! I look forward to the next update as time permits.

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