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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "Hey, you alright?"  

     

    Dana jumped initially, unaware that her friend was even beside her, but calmed her pounding heart quickly when she was reassured by Shane’s presence. "Oh, hey Shane," she sighed. "No, I’m really not, but if I want Alice back I know things may get worse before they get better. And I need to prove to her that I’m not gonna run if they do go that way."

     

    "Well then that’s good Dane. You sound like you mean it," she encouraged.

     

    "I do, it’s just…"

     

    "What?"

     

    "I’m willing to sit here and feel my own heart break watching her with someone else," she began somberly. "And I’ll summon up all the patience I can and wait it out, but I just don’t know if I’ll be able to keep my distance and remain her friend when every part of me aches to touch her every time she’s near. Staying away from Alice has never been my strong suit."

     

    The first band played a fairly short set, forty-five minutes in total, in which Alice spent most of it stealing glances from Dana from across the room. And with five minutes to spare until Jules’ band went on stage, Alice decided it would be an opportune time to take a break from all the Dana-watching and go to the bathroom.  

     

    She exited the stall and made her way over to the sink to wash her hands when the door opened. Looking up into the mirror to see who had entered, she recognized Dana’s familiar face right away. She decided to continue washing her hands without saying a word, hoping that the athlete hadn’t noticed how tense she became at the sight of her. After properly drying her hands on a paper towel, she turned to the door, smiling briefly at the athlete and motioning to leave. But once Alice put her hand on the door handle, Dana abruptly placed her hand over it so that she couldn’t leave.

    "Wait," she pleaded.

     

    "Dana…"

     

    "Al, please. Just hear me out." Dana searched the writer’s eyes for some sort of concession until Alice finally raised her eyebrows as if to say ‘go ahead.’

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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