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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "Hey. Listen, I um…I just came over to apologize—to both of you…about calling you last night Al to come pick me up. I shouldn’t have interrupted your evening because I couldn’t handle my liquor like a big girl, you know? I really am sorry. I promise I won’t bother you with anything like that again," she admitted, staring deep into Alice’s dark brown eyes, hoping for some sort of signal or read on what the writer was feeling. "And Jules," she began, turning her attention to the singer. "I’m sorry I took her away from you last night. I just want you to know that despite everything that’s happened, Al’s still my best friend and I guess sometimes it’s just hard for me to consider that I’m not her only priority anymore, you know?" Dana smiled with as phony a grin as she could while awaiting the other woman to respond.

     

    And she waited a bit longer than usual since Jules was actually quite taken aback by the gesture. "Uh, I appreciate that, Dana," she started off tentatively. "And I’m glad you made it home okay. You’re pretty lucky to have a friend like Alice." She smiled down at her girlfriend and wrapped her left arm around her shoulders.

     

    This embrace still wasn’t enough, however, to divert Alice’s eyes away from being drawn into Dana’s. The two were staring at each other since Dana found her way over to them.

     

    "Yeah, I am…lucky I mean. To have Alice. I forgot that once," she was replying to Jules’ last statement, but still remained focused on Alice alone.

     

    Jules at once began to notice the weird vibe going on between the two and did whatever she could to sever it. "Okay, well, have a good night and enjoy the show."

      
    Once Dana realized she was being dismissed, she mumbled a quick ‘thank you’ to Jules and retreated back into the crowd. And when she was far enough away from Alice and Julianna, she finally let out the breath she’d been inadvertently holding and furiously blinked back the tears that threatened to fall.

     

    She was so caught up in her efforts to pull herself together that she hadn’t even noticed Shane come up from behind her after watching the entire exchange from the other side of the room.

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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