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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "Hey, what’s wrong?" Jules asked, shaking Alice from the trance Dana put her in from the other side of the room. The writer registered the distant noise she heard as her girlfriend’s voice and quickly turned away from Dana to direct her attention on Jules.

     

    "What was that?" Alice questioned with a grin as she inched closer to the singer.

     

    "I asked if you were alright. You seemed like you were in some pretty deep thought over there. Either that or you spotted some hottie you want to take home later," Jules chided as she wiggled her brows.

     

    Trying to suppress the nervous laughter escaping her lips, Alice closed her eyes and shook her head emphatically before leaning in for a quick peck on the lips. And this was exactly the position Dana found them in as she zig-zagged her way through the dense crowd and stood before Jules and Alice. When neither one immediately noticed her presence, she hesitantly cleared her throat hoping that coming over here to speak with both of them wasn’t a mistake. After all, she had thought all day about what she wanted to say to both Jules and Alice, and also to Alice alone. Yet, all the planning and memorizing she could do wouldn’t necessarily make it any easier to say.

     

    It was at about the same time that the knots in her stomach tightened to an unspeakable intensity that Jules, who was facing the athlete, noticed her presence and broke off the kiss from Alice to inform her that Dana was right behind them.

     

    "Uh, honey. I think someone’s here to see you," Jules tentatively whispered as she pulled back from Alice’s embrace.

     

    "Huh," Alice began as she whirled around to surprisingly find Dana staring her right in the face. "Oh, hi."

     

    Dana couldn’t help but inwardly wince at the obvious change in Alice’s tone once she realized it was Dana. The disappointment in her voice was enough to make Dana run out the door and not look back, but she knew that she had to say her piece before doing so. And additionally, if she was to successfully convince Alice that she was in it for keeps, running away from potential confrontation wouldn’t really put her off to a good start.

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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