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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "She’s my best friend, Lara," Alice explained as she moved closer to the chef. "I tried cutting her out of my life once before and it wasn’t good for me or her. I’m sorry if you can’t handle that, but we’ll always be a part of each other’s lives. She’s my best friend."

     

    "Alice, playing dumb doesn’t really suit you. You know Dana better than anyone on the entire planet, are you really telling me you can’t figure out she’s still in love with you? I mean, how dense are you? How dense are both of you?" Lara’s agitation was growing by the second. Try as she might, she couldn’t blame Dana’s feelings on Alice, even though it would be much easier for her to be angry with the writer. But listening to Alice go on about how there was nothing more than an innocent friendship between the two was mind-boggling. She was a smart, intuitive girl. How could she be so blind when it came to Dana? How could she not see what everyone else had seen for months? Dana may have walked away from her relationship with Alice, but it was evident she wanted nothing more than to run right back.

     

    "I’m sorry, are you forgetting that she was the one who left me for you in the first place…"

     

    "It’s called a mistake." Lara wasn’t sure why exactly she was wasting her energy on trying to get Alice to see how Dana felt about her. Hell, this woman was the reason it didn’t work between them after all. But there was something nagging the chef, something driving her to make Alice see the truth Lara had finally seen after all this time spent denying it. And if Lara was going to end the relationship over it, she might as well make sure it was worth it. Otherwise, if she broke up with Dana because of Alice and the two friends ended up tip-toeing around their love for each other for the rest of their lives, Lara’s move to end things would all be in vain.

     

    "Yeah well, you can call it a mistake. I choose to call it what was meant to be. Lara, I’m sorry you and Dana didn’t work out, but whatever she thinks she feels right now, it’s just motivated by her fear of being alone. She just got dumped and now she’s looking for someone to take care of her again. And I’m not about to go running back and be that person for her just so she could use me until the next best thing comes along."

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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