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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "God, you’re more stubborn than she is. Maybe you are meant for each other," Lara mumbled.

     

    "Okay, I’m gonna go before I say something you’ll regret." Alice made a move towards the door but Lara’s words stopped her once again.

     

    "Wait, Alice. I’m sorry. I’m just…I’m pissed you know? I’m pissed at myself for pretending that she was over you, and I’m pissed at Dana for doing the same thing." The chef took a shaky breath before continuing. "But being angry with Dana…well, you know how difficult a task that is.

     

    For the first time in the conversation Alice smiled genuinely at her. Sighing, she agreed with Lara’s last sentiment. "Sadly, I do…Look, I should probably get going anyway. Will you be okay?"

     

    She pondered the question for a moment. "Yeah, I’ve lost her once, I’m pretty sure I can do it again."

     

    "Well then, you’re a better woman than I," Alice conceded with a twinge of unenviable defeat. "Bye Lara." She gave the chef a shy, empathetic smile before turning around and walking out of the kitchen and directly through The Planet’s front door.

     

    Later that Night—The Planet

    A crowd had already gathered in front of the stage even though the first band of the night was just beginning their set. It wasn’t your typical Planet crowd for a Saturday night—this one was much louder, and much looser with their money considering most of the evening’s profits were going to a charity helping needy, inner-city kids. As Jules and the rest of the band were huddled around trying to agree on their set list, Alice stood a few feet away observing the jovial concert goers already pushing towards the stage. As she looked around, she couldn’t help but beam with pride as she took in the scene before her. She knew that most of the people there were present because of her girlfriend’s marketing efforts and the connections she had with the underground music scene in LA and the charitable foundations being helped out by the concert. She also knew that the event was the single-handed creation of Jules, one in which the singer worked tirelessly on over the past three months, organizing the most minute details and resolving conflicts as they arose.

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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