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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    Alice had to admit that she was once again impressed with her girlfriend’s efforts. It wasn’t all the time that a social worker-by-day, singer-by-night was able to invest so much of herself into such a selfless cause. And all the while still making Alice feel like she was the only priority on her plate. Alice herself was a proud multi-tasker, juggling two jobs and a social life in the process, but all of that was for her own self gain. Jules seemed to give new meaning to the word altruistic, making it less of a characteristic and more of a lifestyle. This also left Alice feeling quite pleased with herself for deciding to commit to such an enviable woman.

     

    And so it seemed that as soon as the writer began feeling sure of her recent choices, something came along to shake her confidence once again. And this time, like most every other time before, that something was in the form of one Miss Dana Fairbanks. The athlete tentatively walked through the main entrance of The Planet and anxiously scanned the crowd to see if she could find her friends. Luckily Jenny was close by and greeted her with a quick hug, followed by pulling her hand towards the private table on the side of the stage that Kit had reserved for the gang. And after all the expected greetings were made, Dana turned to dance floor in front of the stage and scanned the area once more to see if she could find the one person missing at the table. It was at that exact moment that Alice let her eyes roam over the crowd until they incidentally locked with Dana’s own wandering pair. The next few moments seemed to pass at an excruciatingly slow pace, unless time had stopped entirely, which was a definite possibility. They both froze in place when their eyes met, Alice wanting to look away but finding it impossible to actually do so. Dana, however, felt her cheeks flush and the rest of her body tingle with an indescribable warmth that she only ever experienced when she was looking at or touching Alice. She debated whether or not she should make her way over to the writer to speak with her properly. After all, standing there staring at her from across the room would only accomplish so much. But she found herself unable to move any part of her body right now. Even her eyes seemed to be glued on Alice and Alice only.

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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