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If I Fall: Chapter 21b
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A small groan was elicited from Alice’s lips, and when she couldn’t take it anymore, she placed two fingers under Dana’s chin and lifted her head up so that their lips could meet once again. After a few more seconds exchanging kisses that could only be described as scorching, Dana hoped she wasn’t pressing her luck as she began to run her hand along the outside of Alice’s heaving breasts. And then once again, the writer could do nothing to stifle the moan that escaped her lips at the feel of Dana’s touch, and thankfully, Dana was there to swallow it right up.
Suddenly, and without warning, Alice maneuvered their bodies so that they had switched spots, without breaking any contact at all. She lowered her hands from either side of Dana’s face down to her shoulders and let her fingers glide effortlessly across Dana’s bare shoulders, until they met the straps of her dress and let them fall down to her arms. She wasted no time in moving her lips down to Dana’s neck, and then down to her shoulders, sucking and nipping along the way. And while this felt incredible to Dana, it just wasn’t enough—somehow she needed more.
She hungrily grabbed the writer’s head, which was still sucking at the hollows of her throat, and raised it back up in order to attack the writer’s mouth with her own. She let her tongue roam every single part of Alice’s mouth, making sure to lightly trace the writer’s lips with it before exploring even deeper, feeling as if she could swallow her whole. And all the while, both women could think of nothing else but consuming only each other and trying their best to suppress the soft moans that were now repeatedly echoing throughout the bathroom.
But just as Dana summoned up enough courage to take the next step and began to lift Alice’s shirt over her head, the writer abruptly halted her. Panting, she broke the contact between their lips, but couldn’t bring herself to back the rest of her body away one inch.
"Wait, wait…," she breathed heavily, hoping to get the next words out as Dana latched herself back onto Alice’s neck.
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Encyclopedia brown? Very funny. This has to be one of the most memorable bathroom scene that I have ever read. D’s confession was genuine and touching. How can A not take her back after that. And it was longest speech I had ever seen D spoke. That was mind blowing. Well done, swissmiss24. Thank you for bringing them back together for even just a moment. I guess things must hit rock bottom before getting better. I had conflicting feelings of Helena interrupting. But what she said to D should shed a light on D the pain the A had endured. I can’t wait for your next post. Thank you so very much.
Thanks for continuing. It’s going to be interesting to see what it finally takes for Al to let Dana back in. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay, I don’t have to kick your ass! Which I couldn’t do anyway, but still. I absolutely loved it, same as always. But I’m really getting anxious for this “happy Danish” you keep alluding to. And don’t worry, I’m planning a trip out there after L3! I’ve been antisocial too long!
Thank you, swismiss!! What delightful Danish… Please keep writing. I am not sure what happened to Fripster and I would hate to lose you or Muted… ;-D “Encyclopedia Brown” — Soooooo Dana! I love how Dana articulated herself. “And I don’t want you to be my teacher Alice, I want you to be my partner” — Swoon. I think Jules is wonderful, but, my heart belongs to Danish. I’m kinda glad Helena barged in. I think Alice would have felt bad if anything more had happened. She needs to come to the realization that Dana is there for her and is the right choice without too much guilt — although I know she will feel bad for hurting Jules. Thank you again for the great update!!
i will probably read this every day until you post again. so please post soon. ny, huh? i am a part time new yorker now – i have to go there part of the week for an indefinite period. i am excited. i love new york. well that was an excellent update – i love that we are starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. they were so cute, i love how dana laid it all out on the line.
WOW!!! How could Alice not take her back after that heartfelt confession? Jules is great and all but she doesn’t have a snowball’s chance in hell. It’s just a matter of time before Alice completely gives in and goes back to Dana. Great update, please post soon.
Thank you so much for the update! I loved it! You know, yesterday I started to reread your story, chapter and verse, so that I could enjoy more your next one, if possible!! I shouldn’t do it though. I’m supossed to work hard on my dissertation; both you and MutedTempest are jeopardizing the project! ;p Just kiddin’. You made my day! Now, I gotta go back to it… (ANGST!).THANKS again!
Oh.my.god!!! wow that was soooooooo good i enjoyed that thoroughly every inch, poor dana poor alice..im gunna go read it again:)
wow. so good, so so good. you are my danish angel. i can’t wait to see where this goes now. pleeease post soon!
helena has some bad timeing but there is still hope there for alice and dana please post soon I love it
YES! there you are! “Hi, kettle, this is Dana, you’re black.” LMAO I almost forgot to check in here for some Danish, glad I did. Please please post soon? If this was a real scene in the show, I’m absolutely possitive that this would be my favorite. Dang Helena, hehehe thanks for the updatw swismiss.:D
Glad you posted again! Dana needs to go get her girl! I can understand Alice’s reservations, but come on they belong together!!! Loved the bathroom scene!!! Keep up the good work!