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If I Fall: Chapter 21b
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"What?" She managed to get only the one word out as she licked and sucked her way across Alice’s neck.
"I just…we can’t. I mean, we should stop," Alice panted mercilessly.
Dana quickly stopped her attentions and shot her eyes up to search Alice’s for some sort of explanation. But sadly all she could see there was an intense mixture of fear and confusion where the desire and passion seemed to be only two minutes ago. Too difficult for the writer to handle, she backed off slightly and tried to focus on anything except Dana.
"Alice." It was asked more so than stated, but Alice couldn’t bear to meet Dana’s eyes with her own. Instead, she kept her head down and refused to look up. "Al?" Dana tried once more, this time placing her index finger under the writer’s chin, and forcing her to make eye contact. And now when she looked into Alice’s eyes, Dana found it hard to see past the somber tears quickly filling them. "Hey," the athlete whispered, looking her intently and squarely in the eye. "I love you."
And Alice wasn’t sure what it was, maybe the tone of Dana’s voice, or the way it was stated, so simply and purely, but she knew, in that moment, for 100% absolute sure, that Dana truly meant it with all her heart. Dana Fairbanks loved Alice Pieszecki, and there was no amount of fear or denial that could ever change that…of this Alice was sure.
"I love you too," the writer whispered back, nearly whimpering, and Dana had to strain to be sure she heard her right. But when she did, her own tears spilled over onto her cheeks and they both stood crying, neither one letting the other go.
"Come here," Dana motioned Alice to come closer and wrapped her arms tightly around her. And Alice just seemed to fit there, resting her head on Dana’s shoulder, perfectly content with staying there forever.
Yet, forever ended somewhat sooner than either one anticipated when they heard the door knob jiggle and Helena burst through. Upon seeing her friend, Alice immediately pulled out of Dana’s grasp and rushed over to the door.
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Encyclopedia brown? Very funny. This has to be one of the most memorable bathroom scene that I have ever read. D’s confession was genuine and touching. How can A not take her back after that. And it was longest speech I had ever seen D spoke. That was mind blowing. Well done, swissmiss24. Thank you for bringing them back together for even just a moment. I guess things must hit rock bottom before getting better. I had conflicting feelings of Helena interrupting. But what she said to D should shed a light on D the pain the A had endured. I can’t wait for your next post. Thank you so very much.
Thanks for continuing. It’s going to be interesting to see what it finally takes for Al to let Dana back in. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay, I don’t have to kick your ass! Which I couldn’t do anyway, but still. I absolutely loved it, same as always. But I’m really getting anxious for this “happy Danish” you keep alluding to. And don’t worry, I’m planning a trip out there after L3! I’ve been antisocial too long!
Thank you, swismiss!! What delightful Danish… Please keep writing. I am not sure what happened to Fripster and I would hate to lose you or Muted… ;-D “Encyclopedia Brown” — Soooooo Dana! I love how Dana articulated herself. “And I don’t want you to be my teacher Alice, I want you to be my partner” — Swoon. I think Jules is wonderful, but, my heart belongs to Danish. I’m kinda glad Helena barged in. I think Alice would have felt bad if anything more had happened. She needs to come to the realization that Dana is there for her and is the right choice without too much guilt — although I know she will feel bad for hurting Jules. Thank you again for the great update!!
i will probably read this every day until you post again. so please post soon. ny, huh? i am a part time new yorker now – i have to go there part of the week for an indefinite period. i am excited. i love new york. well that was an excellent update – i love that we are starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. they were so cute, i love how dana laid it all out on the line.
WOW!!! How could Alice not take her back after that heartfelt confession? Jules is great and all but she doesn’t have a snowball’s chance in hell. It’s just a matter of time before Alice completely gives in and goes back to Dana. Great update, please post soon.
Thank you so much for the update! I loved it! You know, yesterday I started to reread your story, chapter and verse, so that I could enjoy more your next one, if possible!! I shouldn’t do it though. I’m supossed to work hard on my dissertation; both you and MutedTempest are jeopardizing the project! ;p Just kiddin’. You made my day! Now, I gotta go back to it… (ANGST!).THANKS again!
Oh.my.god!!! wow that was soooooooo good i enjoyed that thoroughly every inch, poor dana poor alice..im gunna go read it again:)
wow. so good, so so good. you are my danish angel. i can’t wait to see where this goes now. pleeease post soon!
helena has some bad timeing but there is still hope there for alice and dana please post soon I love it
YES! there you are! “Hi, kettle, this is Dana, you’re black.” LMAO I almost forgot to check in here for some Danish, glad I did. Please please post soon? If this was a real scene in the show, I’m absolutely possitive that this would be my favorite. Dang Helena, hehehe thanks for the updatw swismiss.:D
Glad you posted again! Dana needs to go get her girl! I can understand Alice’s reservations, but come on they belong together!!! Loved the bathroom scene!!! Keep up the good work!