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If I Fall: Chapter 21b
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And during Dana’s heartfelt confession, the two seemed to gravitate closer without realizing that their bodies were now fully pressed up against each other. And as much as Alice was internally struggling with the idea of letting Dana continue, she still found herself whispering, "Yeah?", as she tried to remind herself to breathe.
Somehow Alice’s words registered in Dana’s brain, even though her eyes were completely fixated on the writer’s inviting lips. And while she knew she’d have to say something in response, right now the athlete was having difficulty thinking about anything other than crashing her mouth against Alice’s. "I’d, um…,"she began, licking her own lips and swallowing hard in the process. "I’d…"
"Yeah?" This time it was Alice who tightened her own arms around Dana’s neck while carefully tangling her hands in the athlete’s hair.
"I’d have," Dana began once more, moving one hand up Alice’s frame to rest it softly against her cheek. The writer unconsciously closed her eyes and moved her face closer to the hand that now held her. "I’d have…," she whispered before placing a soft kiss on Alice’s forehead, "done things…," yet another kiss on Alice’s cheek, "completely differently…," and finally one on the other cheek.
"Like how," Alice whispered before opening her eyes once again and peering longingly into Dana’s.
"Well, for starters…" Suddenly Alice felt Dana’s hand move to the back of her neck and she was being pulled closer to the athlete’s face until their lips met in a soft, chaste kiss. Dana quickly pulled away to gage Alice’s reaction, and when she realized her eyes were still squeezed tightly shut, she moved back in to press her lips against the writer’s once more.
The kiss began to deepen as Alice opened her mouth to invite Dana’s tongue entrance in to find her own. She felt Dana tentatively exploring her mouth, which started as a slow exploration, until their tongues began to duel for dominance and Alice felt as if her lips were on fire.
The athlete swiftly pressed herself closer to Alice, forcing her to stumble backwards, with Dana following closely enough to press the writer’s body up against the wall behind her. And just when Alice was sure her lungs had run out of air, Dana pulled back to give them a second to breathe, but only one second, because as soon as Alice gasped for oxygen, Dana began running her lips over Alice’s exposed neck. The writer let out another gasp, but this time it was out of pleasure and not due to any need for air, and Dana took that as her cue to begin placing fierce kisses all over the writer’s pale skin, from her collar bone up to her pulse point. And once she reached her destination, her mouth began an intense, deliberate, sucking of Alice’s pulse point as her hands slid up and down the writer’s back and arms.
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Encyclopedia brown? Very funny. This has to be one of the most memorable bathroom scene that I have ever read. D’s confession was genuine and touching. How can A not take her back after that. And it was longest speech I had ever seen D spoke. That was mind blowing. Well done, swissmiss24. Thank you for bringing them back together for even just a moment. I guess things must hit rock bottom before getting better. I had conflicting feelings of Helena interrupting. But what she said to D should shed a light on D the pain the A had endured. I can’t wait for your next post. Thank you so very much.
Thanks for continuing. It’s going to be interesting to see what it finally takes for Al to let Dana back in. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay, I don’t have to kick your ass! Which I couldn’t do anyway, but still. I absolutely loved it, same as always. But I’m really getting anxious for this “happy Danish” you keep alluding to. And don’t worry, I’m planning a trip out there after L3! I’ve been antisocial too long!
Thank you, swismiss!! What delightful Danish… Please keep writing. I am not sure what happened to Fripster and I would hate to lose you or Muted… ;-D “Encyclopedia Brown” — Soooooo Dana! I love how Dana articulated herself. “And I don’t want you to be my teacher Alice, I want you to be my partner” — Swoon. I think Jules is wonderful, but, my heart belongs to Danish. I’m kinda glad Helena barged in. I think Alice would have felt bad if anything more had happened. She needs to come to the realization that Dana is there for her and is the right choice without too much guilt — although I know she will feel bad for hurting Jules. Thank you again for the great update!!
i will probably read this every day until you post again. so please post soon. ny, huh? i am a part time new yorker now – i have to go there part of the week for an indefinite period. i am excited. i love new york. well that was an excellent update – i love that we are starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. they were so cute, i love how dana laid it all out on the line.
WOW!!! How could Alice not take her back after that heartfelt confession? Jules is great and all but she doesn’t have a snowball’s chance in hell. It’s just a matter of time before Alice completely gives in and goes back to Dana. Great update, please post soon.
Thank you so much for the update! I loved it! You know, yesterday I started to reread your story, chapter and verse, so that I could enjoy more your next one, if possible!! I shouldn’t do it though. I’m supossed to work hard on my dissertation; both you and MutedTempest are jeopardizing the project! ;p Just kiddin’. You made my day! Now, I gotta go back to it… (ANGST!).THANKS again!
Oh.my.god!!! wow that was soooooooo good i enjoyed that thoroughly every inch, poor dana poor alice..im gunna go read it again:)
wow. so good, so so good. you are my danish angel. i can’t wait to see where this goes now. pleeease post soon!
helena has some bad timeing but there is still hope there for alice and dana please post soon I love it
YES! there you are! “Hi, kettle, this is Dana, you’re black.” LMAO I almost forgot to check in here for some Danish, glad I did. Please please post soon? If this was a real scene in the show, I’m absolutely possitive that this would be my favorite. Dang Helena, hehehe thanks for the updatw swismiss.:D
Glad you posted again! Dana needs to go get her girl! I can understand Alice’s reservations, but come on they belong together!!! Loved the bathroom scene!!! Keep up the good work!