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If I Fall: Chapter 24
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But after three consecutive attempts, resulting in frustration and slight despair as the sound of Alice’s voice mail message registered each time on the other end, Dana was left wondering if what had happened in the early hours of the morning had all been a dream. Could Jules have convinced Alice out of returning to Dana? Did she kick and scream and not allow the writer to leave the apartment? Or did she simply bring to Alice’s attention that a tiger never changes its stripes, and Dana was no different now than when she had run away the first time? Was Alice really still that unsure about what she wanted? Or did she just take one look at the singer and realize that Jules was the one she wanted to be with after all?
The questions plagued Dana’s mind like a recurring nightmare that became more frightening with each passing night. This couldn’t all be over before it actually really started…could it? She thought that at the very least she’d be getting a chance to make things between them right again, and she sure as hell wasn’t prepared to let it just slip through her fingers like it seemed to be doing right now.
Amidst the pacing and apprehension, she managed to play out every last plausible scenario in her head, hoping to come up with a logical explanation as to why the writer had not called or so much as answered her phone. However, wondering which terrifying hypothetical could actually call itself reality only made Dana even sicker to her stomach with worry.
It was now mid-afternoon and the athlete had herself convinced that either something had happened to Alice, or their short-lived reunion was simply finished before it began. Either option scared the hell out of Dana, to say the least, but nothing else seemed to make sense at this point. And it was that fear, and that fear alone, that propelled her to grab her keys from the spot in which she left them after practice, get into her car and race over to Alice’s apartment.
She was nearly two blocks away when she felt a vibration in her hand and looked down with unbridled hope to only find that it was Shane calling. With a sigh of disappointment she flipped open the phone and pressed it to her ear.
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First of all, welcome back!!! Second of all…. I thought she called Dana!!! Anyway, I love Jules too. OMG I hate to admit but I love this wavering thing. Yes, all the while it pains me to see Alice and Dana suffer, I actually enjoy it. I must be M out of S.M….. Anyway… I am so freaking glad you’re back! I was longing for you and Alice’s “sex” voice. Gah, what an expression. Yes, indeed, I love her voice. Alice needs to get some courage and talk to Dana. Afterall, one she loves is DANA!! :) hee heeeeThank you so much for posting.!! Plz plz post soon!
Ok just so you know i have loved ur story from day one and sorry i havent commented sooner just wanted to be up to date before i did!! Althou not reli tht happy with u right now JULES??? Why she goin to Jules for?? I know its hard for her to go to Dana after everything but after that fucking hot Bathroom scene everyone inc Alice herself knows tht those two are meant to be together and need to start taking steps towards it even if it is slow …. please lol!!! Anyway rant over reli reli love ur story cant wait for ur next update lol!! :) PPS x x
please update again
You really love this whole cliffhanger business, don’t you? I might be a little upset if you didn’t do it so well. I’m really glad you updated, and this isn’t even close to being filler. It’s necessary for the story, if Danish didn’t wallow in some sorta thought bubble for awhile after everything that’s happened, it wouldn’t make any sense. I just hope Jules doesn’t take advantage of Alice’s emotional state. Not that I think she’d do that deliberately or anything, but…yeah. Okay I’ve been rambling for like ever here, but what I want you to take away from this dissertation is that you rule muchly.
8 Pages is not filler, It was pretty damn good…Please get Dana and Alice in the same room…Love how you write your A&D!
OK. So your filler makes my filler look even more like filler. ;-D Seriously — this was a great chapter. I understand that Alice is going through a lot, but, she really should have called Dana. Leaving her hanging wasn’t very nice. I’m glad Dana is committing herself to the relationship in a way she didn’t the first time around. Thank goodness Shane, Tina and Boo were there to help Dana. I love how your articulated both Alice and Dana’s thoughts on the situation. It is interesting how they both are thinking the same way — what Alice needs is what Dana is prepared to give her. But they need to talk to realize that. Argh. Bad Alice! I understand her reasoning, but, what if Dana sees Jules over there? Does Alice know Dana is leaving soon for NY? Can I beg you to PPS?
oh i missed you swiss.. so happy about the update oh yeh..i love reading what u write i could just read it all day lol wat an interesting ending i hope i dnt have to wait another month for an update BUT if that is wat it takes then i will thank you!!!!!!
Whoosh! Ok it’s taken me ohhh-4 months and some odd days to comment but here i am! PLEASE update, i just cannot stand playing out all of the possible scenarios in my head. You have really done an excellent job with this whole adventure. I just have this dying urge to know what happens-how does it go with Jules-with our beloved Danish….what happens? Only you know and i am begging for an update or even a small glimpse of Alice and Dana happy and together. But another couple of months wont bother me if that’s how long it takes for you to post somemore of this beautifully written story. Thanks so much swiss!
This is the first Danish fic I have read and still one of the best. I’ll die if you don’t finish it, lol. I need HAPPY DANISH!!! Please update!!!