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If I Fall: Chapter 24
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"Hi Shane."
"Hey Dane. What’s going on?"
"Uh," Dana stuttered, glancing around at her surroundings and wondering just how to reply. She decided on a "nothing really," and shrugged her shoulders while signaling her intention to turn into Alice’s parking lot.
"Well that’s good then." Dana immediately acknowledged the odd tone Shane’s voice had taken and contemplated just what the stylist was getting at before she continued. "So if there’s nothing going on, how about meeting me at The Planet?"
"Right now?" the athlete asked, unable to hide the surprise in her voice.
"Yep. No time like the present, right?"
"Uh, well, right now isn’t really a good time Shane."
"Actually Dane, I think right now might be the best time. You’re really not doing anything at the moment, besides stalking Alice, of course. So maybe—"
"Wait, what?" To say she was taken aback was an understatement.
Shane sighed. "I said, since you’re not doing anything right now besides stalking Alice, then we should probably do something else instead."
"Shane how the hell do you know that?"
"Well, see I just drove past your condo to see if everything was okay after I dropped you off last night. I have to admit Dane, I was a little worried. And when you weren’t there, and Alice wasn’t answering her phone either, I figured you were probably over there. But it doesn’t seem like she’s home either, does it?"
"Wait, why do you say that?"
"Look in your rearview loser."
Sure enough, once Dana glanced into her rear view mirror, she spotted the familiar pickup truck parked directly behind her outside Alice’s building, with the equally familiar driver smiling widely at her with the phone to her ear.
"You followed me?"
"Think of it as a gesture of goodwill."
"How does following me to Alice’s count as goodwill?
"Well, I was planning on stopping you from making the huge mistake of going inside."
Dana felt her face redden as the alarm in her voice was unable to be suppressed. "What?"
"Dana, I’m not 100% sure I know what’s going on between you two, but I think I have an idea. And if I’m right, and we both know I typically am when it comes to this stuff, you’ve been calling Alice all day and she obviously doesn’t want to be found right now. So what makes you think it would be any better by just showing up at her doorstep without any warning?"
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First of all, welcome back!!! Second of all…. I thought she called Dana!!! Anyway, I love Jules too. OMG I hate to admit but I love this wavering thing. Yes, all the while it pains me to see Alice and Dana suffer, I actually enjoy it. I must be M out of S.M….. Anyway… I am so freaking glad you’re back! I was longing for you and Alice’s “sex” voice. Gah, what an expression. Yes, indeed, I love her voice. Alice needs to get some courage and talk to Dana. Afterall, one she loves is DANA!! :) hee heeeeThank you so much for posting.!! Plz plz post soon!
Ok just so you know i have loved ur story from day one and sorry i havent commented sooner just wanted to be up to date before i did!! Althou not reli tht happy with u right now JULES??? Why she goin to Jules for?? I know its hard for her to go to Dana after everything but after that fucking hot Bathroom scene everyone inc Alice herself knows tht those two are meant to be together and need to start taking steps towards it even if it is slow …. please lol!!! Anyway rant over reli reli love ur story cant wait for ur next update lol!! :) PPS x x
please update again
You really love this whole cliffhanger business, don’t you? I might be a little upset if you didn’t do it so well. I’m really glad you updated, and this isn’t even close to being filler. It’s necessary for the story, if Danish didn’t wallow in some sorta thought bubble for awhile after everything that’s happened, it wouldn’t make any sense. I just hope Jules doesn’t take advantage of Alice’s emotional state. Not that I think she’d do that deliberately or anything, but…yeah. Okay I’ve been rambling for like ever here, but what I want you to take away from this dissertation is that you rule muchly.
8 Pages is not filler, It was pretty damn good…Please get Dana and Alice in the same room…Love how you write your A&D!
OK. So your filler makes my filler look even more like filler. ;-D Seriously — this was a great chapter. I understand that Alice is going through a lot, but, she really should have called Dana. Leaving her hanging wasn’t very nice. I’m glad Dana is committing herself to the relationship in a way she didn’t the first time around. Thank goodness Shane, Tina and Boo were there to help Dana. I love how your articulated both Alice and Dana’s thoughts on the situation. It is interesting how they both are thinking the same way — what Alice needs is what Dana is prepared to give her. But they need to talk to realize that. Argh. Bad Alice! I understand her reasoning, but, what if Dana sees Jules over there? Does Alice know Dana is leaving soon for NY? Can I beg you to PPS?
oh i missed you swiss.. so happy about the update oh yeh..i love reading what u write i could just read it all day lol wat an interesting ending i hope i dnt have to wait another month for an update BUT if that is wat it takes then i will thank you!!!!!!
Whoosh! Ok it’s taken me ohhh-4 months and some odd days to comment but here i am! PLEASE update, i just cannot stand playing out all of the possible scenarios in my head. You have really done an excellent job with this whole adventure. I just have this dying urge to know what happens-how does it go with Jules-with our beloved Danish….what happens? Only you know and i am begging for an update or even a small glimpse of Alice and Dana happy and together. But another couple of months wont bother me if that’s how long it takes for you to post somemore of this beautifully written story. Thanks so much swiss!
This is the first Danish fic I have read and still one of the best. I’ll die if you don’t finish it, lol. I need HAPPY DANISH!!! Please update!!!