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    If I Fall: Chapter 9

    Story written on January 5, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Getting inside Dana’s head; A surprise party for Alice and Shane spills the beans to Dana; Dana & Lara’s steady decline

     

    Before Alice, she had been with four women. And only one of them had she really even dated. She was so young when she got involved with um…Ralph, and looking back, Dana realized her intense feelings then had been due mostly to the fact that it was the first time she’d ever felt anything real for a girl before, and not so much because she thought Ralph was the love of her life. Then there was Melanie Caplan. Dana had always harbored a minor crush on Melanie, but was severely let down when they ended up going back to her place drunk one night and fucking, only to never really speak again once daylight broke.

     

    Lara was really the only woman Dana had formally dated. Tonya was a rebound from the breakup with Lara, which turned into an instant relationship before Dana could realize how crazy and void of true emotion that match really was. But Tonya took care of Dana without expecting much from Dana in return. The athlete didn’t have to think or feel, or do much of anything because Ton-Ton had always taken care of it already. And this made life a lot easier for her, considering all she had to give in return was a portion of her earned income. But as unhealthy as it may have been, Dana felt that forking over a financial percentage to Tonya was better than having to deal with any of the real emotional issues she kept buried deep inside of her.

     

    And then there was Alice. Dana had been in love with Alice almost since the first day the two met for coffee and a highly interrogative interview where the journalist had probed the athlete about questions regarding her sexuality. And even though Dana was highly offended and honestly scared that Alice would reveal her suspicions, she still found it curious that she was unable to hate the writer. And then the two had somehow managed to forge a friendship, and Dana found herself falling a little bit in love with her friend more and more every day. But again, she was still wasting away in that self-induced closet. And although she guessed that Alice really knew she was gay, the writer happily went along with Dana’s straight-girl charade, and didn’t push or pry until Dana was ready to come out herself.

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    1. I’m liking this more and more every time you post, so yay or something. And I knew I could spot a fellow Helacious fan…but it’s so hard to write her properly while Dana’s still (rightfully) around. Well, for me it is, anyway. And you’re right, I do feel even worse for Lara, although I think she’s kinda digging her own grave by trying to be supportive. Poor soup chef just can’t win no matter what she does. Anyway, I hope Dana gets her head clear about the relationship she’s currently in before she goes making trouble with Alice’s new one…and yeah, I still like Jules. Please make her say “motherfucker” at least once, will ya?

    2. Poor soup chef muted? Poor soup chef my ass! If you ask me she’s the only thing keeping danish apart right now, that and Jules who seems to perfect to be true, can you make her have a penis or something so Alice can break up with her and danish get back together? Ok maybe not that, your story is doing ickedly awesome without my ‘ideas’. You describe Dana perfectly, there’s no other word aside perfect. I just hope she can get her shit together and realise that Alice is the one for her and she truly won’t find another woman better for her. You know I would be kinda happy with Helacious in season 4 since Dana is no longer around, I’ll put it that way since it hurts less :( Now I’m just typing for the sake of typing so I’ll stop and say awesome post, I need more of it, so you must do as Bradshaw says and write more :D xx

    4. Can’t wait for the party! I love where this is going! You’re doing a fantastic job my dear :D This was too short! I gotta know how the party goes damnit. lol. ok so great job and PPS. Oh and I’ll check for your PM. lol

    5. De_leish – if Jules has a penis, she may be the perfect one for Alice, and we’ll never see danish again. lolI can’t feel sorry for Lara because she’s going against her own nature, and she knows that Dana still has feelings for Alice, but hey she got what she wanted. She got Dana back, but not all of her. Dana’s ability to avoid things strikes a little too close to home, so I’m going to leave her alone on that one. lolLet’s get this party started! Soon, please. :-)

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