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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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“Thanks, little brother.” She said with a smile. “Oh. There’s someone you should meet. Howie, this is Leisha. Leisha, Howie.” She said introducing them for the first time.
Howie gave his own smile as he held out his hand. “It’s good to meet the person responsible for getting my sister to dazzle us with that smile of hers after so long.” Leisha didn’t quite know how to take Howie so she just smiled and nodded. Luckily Dana rescued her from having to reply.
“Don’t mind my brother, you’re doing the right thing. Just smile and nod.”
“Well, I can see where I’m under appreciated, I’m off to find someone who knows how brilliant I am.” And Howie leaned over and kissed his sister on the cheek before running off in search of whoever had accompanied him to Dana’s party.
Dana took a breath as she finally found herself standing peacefully in a corner, enjoying the chatter of her surrounding friends. She was having an amazing time being here with everyone, she had spent the last hour making her way around the room catching up with everyone and letting everyone congratulate her. Now she was content to stand here in the corner and just take in the fact that she was so well cared about by her friends, who never failed to amaze her with the ways they came up with to show her that they were all family. “Glad you could rip yourself away from that, what was it? Incredibly amazing it’s-good-to-be-home *****? Ha who’s blushing now?” Dana hugged Shane.
“This is incredible. Thank you so much.” Dana smiled her appreciation and took the glass of champagne that Shane offered her.
“Well, it’s just good to see you again, Dana.” Dana was confused until she met Shane’s dark eyes and then understood what she was talking about. Dana nodded, “I think it’s good to be me, again.” She replied. “I think someone’s looking for you.” Dana pointed to Carmen and Shane nodded one more time and then made her way over to her girlfriend.
Lara had been watching Dana for the entire night and knew as she watched Shane walk away from her that this was the perfect moment for her to approach. And so Lara walked over to Dana nervously. The two of them had only barely spoken to each other since the awkward night that they had shared. “Hey there, Champ.”
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!