Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
Login to add story to favorites
(30 votes, average: 3.10 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Carmen and Shane walked hand in hand into the Planet and waved over at the rest of their friends as they made their way through the morning crowd to their usual table. “Hey! Welcome back! How was New York?” Tina smiled up at them.
“Did you guys watch it?” Shane asked. She shook her head when Bette, Tina, Kit, and Lara all looked guiltily toward the table. “Well, she won.”
“That’s great! Where is she. I mean I know that she hasn’t been coming in, but she’ll come so that we can say congratulations right? She won the US open. We’re her friends we should at least get to hug her or something.” Tina questioned the pair.
“Actually they’re still in New York, Dana has some publicity stuff, ya know. But guys this is bigger than just winning the US open. Dana won all the major tournaments.” Shane shook her head again this time at the blank looks she was getting. “She won the Australian Open, The French Open, The US Open, and Wimbledon. That means that she has-”
“A Grand Slam.” Lara finished quietly, her voice ringing with a measured amount of pride at Dana’s accomplishment.
Shane nodded. “It’s a pretty big thing. I guess it’s pretty hard to do. You know takes a little bit of skill.” Shane shrugged. “But I was thinking that since Dana and Leisha won’t be back for another two days we should have time to throw her a party. To congratulate her.”
Lara nodded and agreed with Shane, “That would be really special to her.”
“Hey you guys are back!” Alice smiled as she joined her friends. “Dana must be in heaven.” She had watched the final match. This time letting Adam know that she wanted to watch so she couldn’t go out. He had seemed to accept this and had told her that he would cal her later. She hadn’t heard form him since and was currently giving him whatever space he needed to figure out how he wanted things to progress with her. “How was she?” She asked noticing that Lara had excused herself and was heading back toward the kitchen.
“Glowing. I’ve only ever seen her happier one time in all the years I’ve known her.” Shane said. “We’re thinking about throwing her a party. Maybe call her mother and invite some of her family, Friends, it’ll be nice right?”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!